ANNOUNCEMENT
This story is now completed! It has a total of 17 chapters. You can find all of it on my
wordpress blog (even the chapters that were originally posted in this thread).
What world do you live in? What does the future cost? How far will they go? Who knows who you are?
Jennifer wakes up in a tiny house with no memory of how she got there. Determined to escape, she discovers more and more mysteries of her prison and slowly begins to wonder what she has gotten into. Meanwhile, a small group of scientists has to figure out the price you need to pay for the future.
This is a mystery story, loosely based on the
room challenge.. My version of it is highly story driven and I won’t be counting any points, since I’m way too excited about the overall plot!
Introduction
Jennifer shifted uncomfortably in the bed. It felt strange. The blanket was scratchy and the smell was wrong. She opened her eyes and was flashed by a wall of pink.
Aaaah, where am I, her mind shreeked. She sat up.
She did not know this place. Everything was so pink. it was like a barbie-fangirl's teenage dream come true. This was definitely
not her room. She tried to remember how she got here, but she couldn't. Her head hurt. Thoughts and images raced through her head but none of them were clear enough to understand. She tried to think of her family, but it was hazy. She didn't even know if she had a family and she could not remember them. She was alone.
She decided to explore her surroundings and to her delight the next room was a kitchen all in green. She instantly felt happier, green was her favourite colour... was it? She thought it might be but then again she was not so sure.
She could see a street and some shops through the window, but they seemed flat, inanimate, there were no
people.
Another room in this strange house was painted in a light blue. Jennifer felt a flow of creativity as she looked at the easel. She believed, she enjoyed painting. And music, yes, she surely liked music... probably.
Then, at the end of the corridor, there was a door. Was this the way outside? She was nervous, but still walked towards it.
Another room. Although it was open to the sky and she could see the sun, it was still a room, closed and there was no way she could climb those sleek walls. She stood and wondered. Why was she here?
Comments
I thought of doing a room challenge because of some of the interesting stories about it around, but I think I'd probably end up getting bored. I do like reading them though, so I'm very curious to learn more about Jennifer!
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Day 1
Jennifer soon realized, that she was trapped. This house had no door and there was no way out. She did try smashing the windows, but either she was extremely weak or the windows were made from rocketproof glass. Probably the latter.
Trying to breathe calmly, she sat down at the computer.
She had to find out about ... yeah, what about exactly? About her past? About this house? About how she got here? Oh yeah right, no problem, somebody was probably blogging about it on the internet. Fool... She buried her head in her hands, as great sadness suddenly overwhelmed her. She had no idea if she would see her imaginary family ever again.
It was weird. News websites seemed to have ceased to exist as she found none. There were documentations, stories, it looked like the internet, but it was all wrong. Something was missing. There are no people...
She tried one of the books she had found on the bookshelf in the kitchen, but her mind couldn't stick to it. Her thoughts always went back to that documentation about gigantic calmari she had seen on this weird internet earlier.
As far as she knew, the book was some meaningless fairytale anyway. She threw it into the corner and angrily stood up.
"Why am I here?", she whispered to herself as she looked around, "Show yourself! I know you're watching me. Why are you doing this?"
But, of course, no one answered. Calm down, you fool, or you'll go insane...
Jennifer breathed deeply and instantly felt calmer. She cooked herself a meal and sat down at the table to think about her situation. She had no idea where she was and why. And to be honest, she didn't really know who she was either. She was alone and it was time to come to terms with what ever was going on and make the best of it.
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Day 2
How does Jennifer cope with being all alone and how are her plans of leaving getting along?
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Love your storytelling style
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What distracted Jennifer while gardening? Something fishy is going on!
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As for the theory I don't want to post spoilers here on the thread for who haven't read it yet, but I'll leave a comment on your blog!
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@ThePlumbob Thanks for your theory I apprecitate it!
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I was going to say it reminded me of that story where she's in a 'set', sort of like a tv show but she doesn't know about it. Also it could be that she's some sort of experiment 'labrat'? Is that what they're called, it sounds so mean I'm not trying to but I forgot what they're called, sorry.
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though I will neither confirm or deny your theories, at least you haven't popped up the theory I fear yet which is good
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Jennifer receives a cryptic message. And what are the scientists worried about?
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Jennifer makes a shocking discovery after working on her new plan
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Who is this blond woman working in the laboratory? And what are her feelings?
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How does Jennifer cope with her newest discovery and what is the new message about...?
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(Sorry, this chapter is pictureless, but I couldn't think of any good picture to accompany this and since it's a letter, pictures wouldn't make too much sense. But there are loads of new hints at the backstory!)
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