Almost Eternal - Updated February 17th «1…26272829303132...Next Go

Sims4MagicalTales

@SnuffyBucket

Melinda and April are cute together.

For some reason, I thought it was funny when Omar turned into a bunny. Like, one moment he looked enraged, and the next moment - bunny.

SnuffyBucket

@Sims4MagicalTales

Ah, were you expecting something sinister? Me too, but Wyatt does things his own way. 😆

SnuffyBucket

A little something to soothe the itch.



Chapter 4.08 - Vice

SnuffyBucket

There is a new chapter over on the index. I'm now taking a very short break to enjoy the festivities, so AE will resume in early January.

My gift is rather controversial. It warrants a caution.



Chapter 4.09 - Heart of Gold

GlacierSnow

Still catching up. I'm about halfway through Book Two now. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love all the messed-up and messy characters and the very tangled plots. Sorry I haven't been leaving comments on the individual chapters. I tend not to when I'm binging a whole series at once. But I am seriously hooked on this story.

SnuffyBucket

@GlacierSnow
Hey, welcome back. Glad you're enjoying the doom and gloom.
As fun as it is to get comments, I really don't mind you not commenting as you go. It's been so long since I wrote the earlier books that I've forgotten a lot of the details, so I have to read the chapter back to understand what the reader is on about. And then I cringe for an hour because I notice all of my typos or wonder what I was I thinking with some choices (looking at you, Nightfall). And then I get this burning desire to EDIT EVERYTHING.
So, yeah. Sporadic 'hey, I like this thing you're doing' comments are totally fine by me.

Also for everyone who's up to date, yes I realise it's been ages since I put a chapter out. You'll get one tomorrow. It contains fire.

GlacierSnow

then I cringe for an hour because I notice all of my typos or wonder what I was I thinking with some choices (looking at you, Nightfall). And then I get this burning desire to EDIT EVERYTHING.

That's because you're reading the Author's Version. Everyone else is reading the Audience's Version, and it's way better.

I really do like this thing you're doing. It is, from my point of view here in the audience, extremely well done, and exciting to read. I love it when the "good" and "bad" of characters gets very complicated. Plus, I like your sense of humor. The TV news panels have been really cracking me up.

SnuffyBucket

He couldn’t just leave the dude this way, could he?





Chapter 4.10 - Undo Button

SnuffyBucket

She had wished for her freedom for centuries



Chapter 4.11 - Chasing Ghosts

SnuffyBucket

Do you have a better idea?



Chapter 4.12 - Holy Potato!

GlacierSnow

I just finished the last chapter of Book Two.

And I survived. But somehow I suspect your promise that it gets "better" in Book Three is a lie.

You are a fantastic writer. I am completely hooked on these messed-up characters and all their messed-up stories.