Not boring at all! I always like seeing things from another character's perspective, I'm all about them layers (pants, now I have Meghan Trainor stuck in my head )
I really enjoyed this one, it was very well written!
It was so interesting to read about Sandy from Travis's perspective! And that ending, gasp
Just going to echo Plumbob. I really loved the writing here. Not that I didn't love the writing before. But the tension here is fantastic and compliments/intensifies April's fear. Imma revisit this chapter some time later just to live through it all again.
Feels like things are getting propelle into motion, I look forward to seeing the girls settling into the creepy house! Their household should be quiet a firecracker - but it's feeling like everyone is where they're supposed to be now. (Not that I'm sure the girls would agree with me heh)
Some cool settings in this one too, the train looked very trainlike
Yep, now they're all in the right place they can settle down and live happily ever after. The end.
I'm glad the train looked like a train. For reasons I'm still not sure of, I decided to challenge myself to not use any CC/poses/mods in this story so you can expect some pretty awful, bodged scenes in future chapters.
@SnuffyBucket I started reading your story. I still have a lot to catch up on, but I'm trapped by your images and your universe
Exciting story with wonderful glimpses of humor. I look forward to catching up on what I have not yet achieved.
Ghosts will appear, but will they be the kind you're thinking of?
Sorry for all the mysterious responses to your posts. I try not to give spoilers but I also want to reply to everyone.
@MonaSolstraale
Hi, welcome! I'm really glad you decided to check it out and you're enjoying it. Let me know if something doesn't translate.
I shouldn't be having this much fun with a tale of a dark descent into vampiric madness, but darn it, I am! There’s something hilarious about the casual way that these girls are turning into vampires and will probably end up either murdering or infecting everyone around them. With mojitos. And scary horror movies. And probably a casual visit to a salon at one point.
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Oh dear. Straight to Caleb’s house? I mean, I’m all for some vengeance on dr. vampy there, but April is the only one who’s learned to use her powers, and Melinda hasn’t even drunk from anyone yet 0.o Caleb will likely wipe the floor with her… or maybe he’ll be angry at all the baby vamps his baby vamp is creating? Probably not. Seeing how he started it and all. XD
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@ThePlumbob
Good to hear that you like layers. This thing is an onion inside an onion inside a baumkuchen.
Ha! Oh dear. I'd help you out but...
Less OT, I'm looking forward to the onion-fest for sure!
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Just going to echo Plumbob. I really loved the writing here. Not that I didn't love the writing before. But the tension here is fantastic and compliments/intensifies April's fear. Imma revisit this chapter some time later just to live through it all again.
@mercuryfoam
Every chapter is a piece of the puzzle but this is a crucial one, so I'm glad my writing wasn't completely pants.
@DeafSimmer
Chapter 14 - Out Of Control
Some cool settings in this one too, the train looked very trainlike
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I'm glad the train looked like a train. For reasons I'm still not sure of, I decided to challenge myself to not use any CC/poses/mods in this story so you can expect some pretty awful, bodged scenes in future chapters.
Exciting story with wonderful glimpses of humor. I look forward to catching up on what I have not yet achieved.
Something for the weekend.
Chapter 15 - Real Drinks
Sorry for all the mysterious responses to your posts. I try not to give spoilers but I also want to reply to everyone.
@MonaSolstraale
Hi, welcome! I'm really glad you decided to check it out and you're enjoying it. Let me know if something doesn't translate.
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You get comfy. Excuse the mess, I didn't think I'd get guests. Don't open that drawer.
Thank you pointed out yourself in my Forum thread
It was your great banner that lured me
Chapter 16 - Vampiric Allure
I love any comment that starts with 'Oh dear'. Proper drops my heart in my stomach, that.