I loved the caption: "Get a job and get a haircut young man!" I can picture that happening today too, but the woman would be more elderly now. As I'm just starting out in the story, my assumptions are either Travis and Summer are a thing or Travis likes Summer. Guess I'll find out soon enough.
Chapter 3
"But the question remained: Who was this Bianca and why did she pick on him?" I'm hoping the answer is in a future chapter. Maybe he'll go after her instead of seeing if Summer is available. I'm sure Travis would like that.
Chapter 4
Too funny. We know Nancy's job without Geoffrey having to spell it out. I hope Jeremy caught on. I also enjoyed Jeremy's response to Katrina to avoid her at the end. I really am enjoying this so far. Great job!
Chapter 5
Gotta love a good game of chess. I like your portrayal of Lily Feng. Also gotta love a good protest. Plenty of those back in the days, too, as my parents would share. Of course, they were nothing like the protests today (which are worse).
Chapter 6
A possible interest for Jeremy. By the looks of it, Suzy is single. Now I'm curious if he'll actually ask any of these women out. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.
Chapter 7
I have to say if a woman like Judith sat down next to me and just started jabbering like that, I prob would have nodded and then made an excuse to leave... not ask, "so what's your star sign?" But that's just me But it did get her to leave.
Chapter 8
I'm not surprised Bakko would nonstop chat about his outfit lifestyle. He looks like to be Suzy's best interview of the three.
I'm guessing Johnny didn't want Zoe to know where he lived, so he gave her a wrong address and it ended up being Jeremy's. I'm glad Jeremy took the plunge though and called up Bianca.
Chapter 10
So, was the guru spot on for Suzy or did you place Burr there on purpose?
That's a very good interpretation on why they thought he was Johnny. Johnny in this case is Zest: The jokester himself. I imagined he'd been pestered by Bianca and Zoe at a gig and wanted to divert them away from him. About 70% of the plot comes through gameplay and the rest through interpretation. When I played through that day's events I saw Burr hanging around in the karaoke bar and noticed he was the only single young adult at the festival so I weaved both Suzy going to the guru and his presence at the festival together.
Aww, that was a sweet date with Jeremy and Bianca. Hoping to see a relationship blossom between the two.
Chapter 12
I'd say Zoe is a little stuck up. To me, she could be the leader in a Mean Girl club.
Chapter 13
Oooo, a mystery has started. Yay! Looking forward to reading more about... The Visitors. Suzy is going to turn into an investigative reporter with this.
Bummer! I was hoping Jeremy and Bianca were going to be an item. I suppose there's still a chance in future chapters. I also am cracking up that every time Jeremy seems to want to have dinner or a meal, someone decides to pay a visit.
Chapter 15
Oh, another mystery. Who took the loose pages from the gardening book?! And do they know someone else was reading them?! I'm definitely staying tuned.
Chapter 16
I like the intro of Action. A cop out to discover the secrets of the neighborhood. Suzy is going to be investigating the Landgraabs and the Fengs while Action is going to be investigating Suzy.
Poor Jeremy. At least Barbara cheered him up by the end of his day. Hopefully he remembers she mentioned the Spice Festival. I'm sure he can find her again there.
Chapter 18
It's funny to see Mortimer Goth not in his usual red and black suit and in a casual wear t-shirt.
Chapter 19
Action needs to start his own Private Investigation firm. Suzy can work for him.
Chapter 20
I wonder of the Landgraab's know that the Goth's have books lined up about them. As the chapter ends, "The plot thickens", it really does. It's like you said to me earlier. A soap opera but in writing. I'm hooked!
Mortimer's T-shirt is the product of the humour and hijinks festival. As a long time member of the Company of Jokesters he's expected to wear the shirt.
I wonder how I could make a private eye firm work in Sims 4? I'll start with building an office with a fan, typewriter. blinds and a coffee machine.
Following on from the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 119, Action chases the mysterious Leanne McGregor and hunts all over Sim City for her. Chapter 120: The Chase.
@LegacySims2017 I was in a very similar position a few weeks ago and, you're right, you'll catch up sooner than you think. You'll catch yourself thinking "I'll read one more post," and next thing you know, you've read six or seven more.
@LegacySims2017 I was in a very similar position a few weeks ago and, you're right, you'll catch up sooner than you think. You'll catch yourself thinking "I'll read one more post," and next thing you know, you've read six or seven more.
I have worked out a sub-plot about Bella's disappearance and, in keeping with the other premades, I've researched the official Sims history of the characters. With the Landgraabs, Fengs and Goths things are coming at Suzy so fast she can't investigate them all and she's been warned by Mortimer not to pry into his family's private life. It's a plot hook that is simmering for the moment.
Chapter 24
Candy's an aspiring singer/actress/dancer/model and hangs out with a pretty fast 1960s crowd so I think you can connect the dots as to what THAT involves...she's worried he's a narcotics cop and will bust her and her friends. In gameplay terms she agreed to go on the date but bailed on Action the moment they arrived at the restaurant.
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I honestly wish I started it earlier.
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Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
I wonder how I could make a private eye firm work in Sims 4? I'll start with building an office with a fan, typewriter. blinds and a coffee machine.
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Tagging @BreeMiles @JestTru @mightysprite @SnowBnuuy @orenjiAi @MoonlightGraham @LegacySims2017
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Exie hay, cavero, mabza meeah vendarzo.
Yevsas mairzeemo!
That's what I like to hear!
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I had so much fun writing this one. All the right townies popped up in the gameplay at exactly the right time.
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Chapter 24
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Chapter 23:
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