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Vampire Kisses

Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
VAMPIRE KISSES

If you like reading your stories with atmospheric music, adding to the suspense, this story is for you!! Just head over to my new blog

Please leave a comment let me know what you think :smiley:

Raven Madison, a 16-year-old goth misfit in a town she calls Dullsville has one dream ever since she was in kindergarten - to become a vampire. So when the rumored haunted mansion atop Benson Hill gets inhabitants whom "Dullsvillians" believe to be bloodthirsty vampires, Raven investigates only to be caught in a dreamlike reality that her ambition to become a vampire might be happening after all.

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Hi, I'm Orchidah

Straight out of South Africa! I'm the founder and creator of this blog. Besides creating awesome content in Sims 4 (which btw takes out a lot of free time from my everyday life hehe) I'm also a freelance; Graphic Designer, Muralist and Fine Artist. Life is tough in this country I live in...

I'm absolutely and utterly new at posting stories on forums. Please be kind lol! There will still be a lot of mistakes and changes to be made as I go forward. Positive input is always welcome. Besides, maybe there's a good book that you would like me to reenact, let me know I'd like to have a look at it and maybe even get to read some new good books along the way as well.

The main goal here is to enjoy game play while telling stories, the bonus here is you get to read new stories and discover new books that you might think "where have you been all my life!?"

If you enjoy my work, you should definitely join my newsletter not to miss out on new chapters!
( I will be posting new chapters for this story, every month for next few months, some chapters are divided in a Part 1 and Part 2. )
Please help share my stories, share the love, share the enjoyment. I truly appreciate every bit of support shown and given. ;)

Happy Reading!
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  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020

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    Synopsis

    “I want a relationship I can finally sink my teeth into.”
    ~ Alexander Sterling


    A new guy in town. Rumors of vampires. Dangerous first love. This is where it all begins... The mansion on top of Benson Hill has stood empty for years. But one day it seems to be occupied, and its mysterious, handsome inhabitant Alexander Sterling becomes the source of much talk around town. Raven, a vampire-obsessed Goth-girl who has always considered herself an outsider in "Dullsville," is determined to uncover the truth surrounding the secretive Alexander. As she gets to know him, and their spark intensifies, Raven finds herself in some unanticipated situations. Can Alexander make her lifelong dream come true? But love always has its complications - especially when it can only be awakened at nightfall.
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  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020

    Chapter 1: Little Monster

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    It first happened when I was five. I had just finished coloring in My Kindergarten Book. It was filled with Picasso-like drawings of my mom and dad, an Elmer's-glued, tissue-papered collage, and the answers to questions (favorite color, pets, best friend, etc.) written down by our hundred-year-old teacher, Mrs. Peevish.

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    My classmates and I were sitting in a semicircle on the floor in the reading area. "Bradley, what do you want to be when you grow up?" Mrs. Peevish asked after all the other questions had been answered.

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    "A fire fighter!" he shouted.

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    "Cindi?" "Uh...a nurse," Cindi Warren whispered meekly.

    Mrs. Peevish went through the rest of the class. Police officers. Astronauts. Football players. Finally it was my turn.

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    "Raven, what do you want to be when you grow up?" Mrs. Peevish asked, her green eyes staring through me.

    I said nothing.

    "An actress?"

    I shook my head.

    "A doctor?"

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    "Nuh, uh," I said.

    "A flight attendant?"

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    "Yuck!" I replied.

    "Then what?" she asked, annoyed.

    I thought for a moment. "I want to be..."

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    "Yes?"

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    "I want to be...a vampire!" I shouted, to the shock and amazement of Mrs. Peevish and my classmates. For a moment I thought she started to laugh; maybe she really did. The children sitting next to me inched away.

    I spent most of my childhood watching others inch away.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020
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    I was conceived on my dad's water bed--or

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    on the rooftop of my mom's college dorm under twinkling stars--

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    depending

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    on which one of my parents is telling the story.

    They were soul mates that couldn't part with the seventies: true love mixed with drugs, some raspberry incense, and the music of the Grateful Dead. A beaded- jeweled, halter-topped, cutoff blue-jeaned, barefooted girl, intertwined with a long-haired, unshaven, Elton John-spectacled, suntanned, leather-vested, bell-bottomed-and-sandaled guy. I think they're lucky I wasn't more eccentric. I could have wanted to be a beaded-haired hippie werewolf! But somehow I became obsessed with vampires.

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    Sarah and Paul Madison became more responsible after my entrance into this world--or I'll rephrase it and say my parents were "less glassy eyed." They sold the Volkswagen flower power van that they were living in and actually started renting property. Our hippie apartment was decorated with 3-D glow-in-the-dark flower posters and orange tubes with a Play-Doh substance that moved on its own-- lava lamps--that you could stare at forever. It was the best time ever.

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    The three of us laughed and played Chutes and Ladders and squeezed T(w)inkies between our teeth.

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    We stayed up late, watching Dracula movies, Dark Shadows with the infamous Barnabas Collins, and Batman on a black-and-white TV we'd received when we opened a bank account.

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    I felt secure under the blanket of midnight, rubbing Mom's growing belly, which made noises like the orange lava lamps. I figured she was going to give birth to more moving Play-Doh.

    Everything changed when she gave birth to the playdough--

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    if only it wasn't Play-Doh.

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    She gave birth to

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    Nerd Boy!

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    How could she? How could she destroy all the T(w)inkie nights?

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    Now she went to bed early, and that creation that my parents called "Billy" cried and fussed all night. I was suddenly alone. It was Dracula--the Dracula on TV-- that kept me company while Mom slept, Nerd Boy wailed, and Dad changed smelly diapers in the darkness.

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    And if that wasn't bad enough, suddenly they sent me to a place that wasn't my apartment, that didn't have wild 3-D flower posters on the walls, but boring collages of kids' handprints.

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    Who decorates around here? I wondered.

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    It was overcrowded with Sears catalog girls in frilly dresses and Sears catalog boys in tapered pants and perfectly combed hair. Mom and Dad called it "kindergarten."

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    "They'll be your friends," my mom reassured me, as I clung to her side for dear life. She waved good-bye and blew me kisses as I stood alone beside the matronly Mrs. Peevish, which was as alone as one can get. I watched my mom walk away with Nerd Boy on her hip as she took him back to the place filled with glow-in-the-dark posters, monster movies, and T(w)inkies.

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    Somehow I made it through the day. Cutting and gluing black paper on black paper,

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    finger painting Barbie's lips black,

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    and telling the assistant teacher ghost stories, while the Sears catalog kids ran around like they were all cousins at an all-American family picnic.

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    I was even happy to see Nerd Boy when Mom finally came to pick me up.
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  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    That night she found me with my lips pressed against the TV screen, trying to kiss Christopher Lee in Horror of Dracula.

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    "Raven! What are you doing up so late? You have school tomorrow!"

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    "What?" I said. The Hostess cherry pie that I had been eating fell to the floor, and my heart fell with it.

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    "But I thought it was just the one time?" I said, panicked.

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    "Sweet Raven. You have to go every day!"

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    Every day? The words echoed inside my head. It was a life sentence!

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    That night Nerd Boy couldn't hope to compete with my dramatic wailing and crying.

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    As I lay alone in my bed, I prayed for eternal darkness and a sun that never rose.

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    Unfortunately the next day I awoke to a blinding light and a monster headache.

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    I longed to be around at least one person that I could connect with. But I couldn't find any, at home or school. At home the lava lamps were replaced with Tiffany-style floor lamps, the glow-in-the- dark posters were covered with Laura Ashley wallpaper, and our grainy black-and-white TV was upgraded to a twenty-five-inch color model.

    At school instead of singing the songs of Mary Poppins, I whistled the theme to The Exorcist.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    Halfway through kindergarten I tried to become a vampire. Trevor Mitchell, a perfectly combed blond with weak blue eyes, was my nemesis from the moment I stared him down when he tried to cut in front of me on the slide.

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    He hated me because I was the only kid who wasn't afraid of him. The kids and teachers kissed up to him because his father owned most of the land their houses sat on. Trevor was in a biting phase, not because he wanted to be a vampire like me, but just because he was mean. He had taken pieces of flesh out of everyone but me. And I was starting to get ticked off!

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    We were on the playground, standing by the basketball hoop, when I pinched the skin of his puny little arm so hard I thought blood would squirt out. His face turned beet red. I stood motionless and waited.

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    Trevor's body trembled with anger, and his eyes swelled with vengeance as I mischievously smiled back.

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    Then he left his dental impressions in my expectant hand.

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    Mrs. Peevish was forced to sit him against the school wall, and I happily danced around the playground, waiting to transform into a vampire bat.

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    "That Raven is an odd one," I overheard Mrs. Peevish saying to another teacher as I skipped past the crying Trevor, who was now throwing a fit against the hard blacktop.

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    I blew him a grateful kiss with my bitten hand.

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    I wore my wound proudly as I got on the school swing. I could fly now, right? But I'd need something to take me into warp speed.

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    The seat went as high as the top of the fence, but I was aiming for the puffy clouds. The rusty swing started to buckle when I jumped off.

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    I planned to fly across the playground--all the way to a startled Trevor. Instead I plummeted to the muddy earth, doing further damage to my tooth-marked hand. I cried more from the fact that I didn't possess supernatural powers like my heroes on TV than because of my throbbing flesh.

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    With my bite trapped under ice, Mrs. Peevish sat me against the wall to rest while the spoiled snot-nosed Trevor was now free to play.

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    He blew me a teasing kiss and said, "Thank you."

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    I stuck out my tongue and called him a name I had heard a mobster say in The Godfather.

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    Mrs. Peevish immediately sent me inside.

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    I was sent inside a lot during my childhood recesses...

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    I was destined to take a recess from recess.

    Stay tuned for Chapter 2 ;)
  • NushnushganayNushnushganay Posts: 9,418 Member
    Orchidah1 wrote: »

    VAMPIRE KISSES


    If you like reading your stories with atmospheric music, adding to the suspense, this story is for you!! Just head over to my new blog

    Raven Madison, a 16-year-old goth misfit in a town she calls Dullsville has one dream ever since she was in kindergarten - to become a vampire. So when the rumored haunted mansion atop Benson Hill gets inhabitants whom "Dullsvillians" believe to be bloodthirsty vampires, Raven investigates only to be caught in a dreamlike reality that her ambition to become a vampire might be happening after all.
    ---

    Hi, I'm Orchidah

    Straight out of South Africa! I'm the founder and creator of this blog. Besides creating awesome content in Sims 4 (which btw takes out a lot of free time from my everyday life hehe) I'm also a freelance; Graphic Designer, Muralist and Fine Artist. Life is tough in this country I live in...

    I'm absolutely and utterly a newbie at this. Please be kind lol! There will still be a lot of mistakes and changes to be made as I go forward. Positive input is always welcome. Besides, maybe there's a good book that you would like me to reenact, let me know I'd like to have a look at it and maybe even get to read some new good books along the way as well.

    The main goal here is to enjoy game play while telling stories, the bonus here is you get to read new stories and discover new books that you might think "where have you been all my life!?" This site will host all of my reenacting of books and original stories using Sims 4 for creating scenes. For now I'll kick it off with Vampire Kisses by Ellen Schreiber.

    As this blog grows I will slowly start adding my personal builds, contents and original stories. This will eventually become more than a blog, too. I will publish links from other Blogger's Sim Stories I like and interesting books which are good reads.

    If you enjoy my work, you should definitely join my newsletter not to miss out on new chapters!
    ( I will be posting new chapters for this story, every month for next few months, some chapters are divided in a Part 1 and Part 2. )
    Please help share my stories, share the love, share the enjoyment. I truly appreciate every bit of support shown and given. ;)

    Happy Reading!

    You piqued my interest with the title of the post, and carried it with the rest! Will be checking it all out! Love your avi, by the way. Lighting up a smoke with a molotov cocktail is what it suggests to my mind (what happens in the next instant is up to the imagination, but the sheer swagger of it is the takeaway)
    Racism is EVERYONE's fight #BLM #StopAsianHate
    Let's make Liberty and Justice For All a reality.

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  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020
    Orchidah1 wrote: »


    Thank you so so much for your comment!! Thank you for acknowledging my avi :D it's my gaming avi with gaming status that always reads: Do not be afraid of what should be afraid of you :p
  • smurfy77smurfy77 Posts: 1,250 Member
    Can't wait to read more! I love this so far
  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    smurfy77 wrote: »
    Can't wait to read more! I love this so far

    Thank you for your feedback <3 ! Chapter 2 will be posted here soon :#
  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020

    Chapter 2: Dullsville

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    The official welcome sign to my town should read, "Welcome to Dullsville--bigger than a cave, but small enough to feel claustrophobic!"

    A population of 8,000 look-a-likes, a weather forecast that's perfectly miserable all year round--sunny--fenced in cookie-cutter houses, and sprawling farmland--that's Dullsville.

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    The 8:10 freight train that runs through town separates the wrong side of the tracks from the right side, the cornfields from the golf course, the tractors from the golf carts.

    I think the town has it backward. How can land that grows corn and wheat be worth less than land filled with sand traps?

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    The hundred-year-old courthouse sits on the town square.

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    I haven't gotten into enough trouble to be dragged there--yet.

    Boutiques,

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    a travel agent,

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    a computer store,

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    a florist,

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    and a second-run movie theater -

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    all sit happily around the square.

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    I wish our house could lie on the railroad tracks, on wheels, and carry us out of town, but we're on the right side near the country club. Dullsville.

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    The only exciting place is an abandoned mansion an exiled baroness built on top of Benson Hill, where she died in isolation.

    I have only one friend in Dullsville--a farm girl, Becky Miller, who is more unpopular than I am. I was in third grade when I officially met her.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020
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    Sitting on the school steps waiting for my mom to pick me up (late as usual) now that she was trying to be a Corporate Cathy, I noticed an impish girl cowering at the bottom of the steps, crying like a baby. She didn't have any friends, since she was shy and lived on the east side of the tracks. She was one of the few farm girls in our school and sat two rows behind me in class.

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    "What's wrong?" I asked, feeling sorry for her.

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    "My mom forgot me!" she hollered, her hands covering her pathetic, wet face.

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    "No, she didn't," I consoled.

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    "She's never this late!" she cried.

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    "Maybe she's stuck in traffic."

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    "You think so?"

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    "Sure!

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    Or maybe she got a call from one of those nosey sales people that always asks, 'Is your mother home?'"

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    "Really?"

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    "Happens all the time.

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    Or maybe she had to stop for snacks, and there was a long line at 7-Eleven."

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    "Would she do that?"

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    "Why not, you have to eat, don't you? So never fear. She'll be here."

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    And sure enough,

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    a blue pickup drove up with one apologetic mother and a friendly, fluffy sheepdog.

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    "My mom says you can come over Saturday if it's okay with your parents," Becky said, running back to me.

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    No one had ever invited me to their house before. I wasn't shy like Becky but I was just as unpopular. I was always late for school because I overslept, I wore sunglasses in class, and I had opinions, all atypical in Dullsville.

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    Becky had a backyard as big as Transylvania--

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    a great place to hide and play monsters and eat all the fresh apples a growling third- grade stomach could hold. I was the only kid in our class who didn't beat her up, exclude her, or call her names, and I even kicked anyone who tried.

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    She was my three-dimensional shadow. I was her best friend and her bodyguard. And still am.

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    When I wasn't playing with Becky, I spent my time applying black lipstick and nail polish,

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    scuffing my already-worn combat boots,

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    and burying my head behind Anne Rice novels.

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    I was eleven when our family went to New Orleans for vacation. Mom and Dad wanted to play blackjack on the Flamingo riverboat casino. Nerd Boy wanted to go to the aquarium. But I knew where I was going: I wanted to visit the house of Anne Rice's birth, the historical homes she had restored, and the mansion she now called home.

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    I stood mesmerized outside its iron gate, a Gothic mega- mansion, my mom (my uninvited chaperone) by my side.

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    I could sense ravens flying overhead, even though there probably weren't any. It was a shame I hadn't come at night--it would have been that much more beautiful.

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    Several girls who looked just like me stood across the street, taking pictures.

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    I wanted to rush over and say, "Be my friends. We can tour the cemeteries together!" It was the first time in my life I felt like I belonged. I was in the city where they stack coffins on top of one another so you can see them, instead of burying them deep within the earth. There were college guys with two-toned spiky blond hair. Funky people were everywhere, except on Bourbon Street, where the tourists looked like they'd flown in from Dullsville.

    Suddenly a limousine pulled around the corner. The blackest limo I had ever seen.

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    The driver, complete with black chauffeur's hat, opened the door, and she stepped out!

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    I freaked and watched motionless, like time was standing still. Right before my eyes was my idol of all living idols,

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    Anne Rice!

    She glowed like a movie star, a Gothic angel, a heavenly creature. Her long black hair flowed over her shoulders and glistened; she wore a golden headband, a long, flowing silky skirt, and a fabulous vampirish, dark cloak. I was speechless. I thought I might go into shock.

    Fortunately my mom's never speechless.

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    "Could my daughter please have your autograph?"

    "Sure," the queen of nocturnal adventures sweetly replied.

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    I walked toward her, as if my marshmallow legs would melt under the sun at any moment. After she signed a yellow Post-it note my mom found in her purse, the Gothic starlet and I were standing beside each other, smiling, her arm around my waist.

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    Anne Rice had agreed to take a picture with me!

    I had never smiled like that in my life. She probably smiled like she'd smiled a million times before. A moment she'll never remember, a moment I'll never forget.

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    Why didn't I tell her I loved her books? Why didn't I tell her how much she meant to me? That I thought she had a handle on things like no one else did?

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    I screamed with excitement for the rest of the day, reenacting the scene over and over for my dad and Nerd Boy at our antique- filled, pastel pink bed-and-breakfast. It was our first day in New Orleans, and I was ready to go home. Who cared about a stupid aquarium, the French Quarter, blues bands, and Mardi Gras beads when I'd just seen a vampire angel?

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    I waited all day to get the film developed, only to find that the picture of me and Anne Rice didn't come out. Sullen, I retreated back to the hotel with my mother.

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    Despite the fact she and I had appeared in photographs separately, could it be possible that the combination of the two vampire-lovers couldn't be captured on film? Or rather it was just a reminder that she was a brilliant bestselling writer, and I was a screamy, dreamy child going through a dark phase.

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    Or maybe it was that my mom was a lousy photographer.
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    Stay tuned for Chapter 3 coming in February. Remember to bookmark this thread not to miss any updates, also if you'd like to follow my news letter not to miss any new chapters you can follow this link here
  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020

    Chapter 3 - Monster Mash (Part 1)

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    My Sweet Sixteenth birthday. Shouldn't all birthdays be sweet? Why should sixteen be any sweeter? It seemed like a lot of hype to me!

    In Dullsville, they celebrate today, my sixteenth birthday, as any other day.

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    It all started with Nerd Boy's shouting at me. "Get up, Raven. You don't want to be late. It's time for school!"

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    How could two kids come from the same parents and be so different? Maybe there is something to that theory about the mailman. But in Nerd Boy's case my mother must have had an affair with the librarian.

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    I dragged myself out of bed and put on a black, cotton sleeveless dress and black hiking boots, and outlined my full lips with black lipstick.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    Two white-flowered cakes, one in the shape of a 1 and the other in the shape of a 6, awaited me on the kitchen table.

    I grazed the 6 cake with my index finger and licked the icing off.

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    "Happy birthday!" my mom said, kissing me. "That's for tonight, but you can have this now," she said handing me a package.

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    "Happy birthday, Rave," my dad said, also giving me a kiss on the cheek.

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    "I bet you have no idea what you're giving me," I teased my dad as I held the package.

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    "No. But I'm sure it cost a lot."

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020

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    I shook the light package in my hand and heard a rattle. I stared at the Happy Birthday wrapping paper. It could be the keys to a car-- my very own Batmobile! After all, it was my sixteenth birthday.

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    "I wanted to buy you something special," my mom said, smiling.

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    I ripped the package open excitedly and lifted the jewelry box lid. A string of shiny white pearls stared back at me.

    "Every girl should have a pearl necklace for special occasions." My mom gleamed.

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    This was my mom's corporate version of hippie love beads. I forced a crooked smile as I tried to hide my disappointment. "Thanks," I said, hugging them both.

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    I began to put the necklace back in the box, but my parents glared at me, so I reluctantly modeled it for them.

    "It looks gorgeous on you." My mom glowed.

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    "I'll save them for something really special," I replied, putting them back in the box.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    The doorbell rang, and Becky came in with a small black gift bag.

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    "Happy birthday!" she shouted as we went into the living room.

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    "Thanks. You didn't have to get me anything."

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    "You say that every year," she teased and handed me the bag. "By the way, I saw a moving van last night outside the Mansion!" she whispered.

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    "No way! Someone finally moved in?"

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    "Guess so. But all I saw were the movers carrying in oak desks, grandfather clocks, and huge crates marked 'Soil.' And they have a teenage son."

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    "He was probably born wearing khaki pants. And I'm sure his parents are some boring Ivy Leaguers," I replied. "I hope they don't remodel it and chase out all the spiders."

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    "Yeah. And tear down the gate and put up a white picket fence." "And a plastic goose on the front lawn."

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    We both giggled like mad as I stuck my hand into the bag.

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    "I wanted to buy you something special, since you're sixteen."

    I pulled out a black leather necklace with a pewter charm. The charm was a bat!

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member

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    "I love it!" I screamed, putting it on.

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    My mom leered at me from the kitchen.

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    "Next time we'll give her money," I heard her tell my father.

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    "Pearls!" I whispered to Becky as we left the house.

    To be continued...

    Stay tuned for Chapter 3 (Part 2) coming soon. Remember to bookmark this thread not to miss any updates, also if you'd like to follow my news letter not to miss any new chapters you can follow this link here
  • pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
    edited January 2020
    Wow! So glad I found this. I love reading your story on the website. If you want to just save time, just put a link to the story so people can get there (for a full chapter, too).

    Your pictures are fabulous!

    I'm intrigued by your little vampiress. I'm hoping the teen boy who moved in is Caleb Vatore or another vampire hottie you made yourself! And I love how different she is from her bff but they don't care!
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  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited January 2020
    Wow! So glad I found this. I love reading your story on the website. If you want to just save time, just put a link to the story so people can get there (for a full chapter, too).

    Your pictures are fabulous!

    I'm intrigued by your little vampiress. I'm hoping the teen boy who moved in is Caleb Vatore or another vampire hottie you made yourself! And I love how different she is from her bff but they don't care!

    Thank you so much! I'm so glad you love it :D<3 Ooh the mystery boy moved in recently, I honestly can't wait until it's time to finally introduce him! Raven and Becky differ from each other like night and day and I love that about them too, both outsiders but 100% comfortable with each other they're a perfect match for each other ;) Yeah was thinking from Chapter 3 part 2 I'll only be posting the link with one or two images. I do create more than one post to keep the thread in the loop, until I won't need to anymore :# Thank you so much for following my story <3<3
  • smurfy77smurfy77 Posts: 1,250 Member
    Love this story cannot wait to read more! I love your CC!
  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    smurfy77 wrote: »
    Love this story cannot wait to read more! I love your CC!

    @smurfy77 Thank you!! :D<3
  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited February 2020

    Chapter 3 - Monster Mash (Part 2)

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    I was in gym class wearing a black shirt, shorts, and combat boots instead of the required white-on-white and gym shoes. Really, what's the point? I thought. Does a white ensemble make a student a better athlete?

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    "Raven, I don't feel like sending you to the office today. Why don't you just give me a break for once and wear what you're supposed to wear?" Mr. Harris, the gym teacher, whined.

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    "It's my birthday. Maybe you could give me a break this once!"

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    He stared at me, not knowing what to say. "Just today," he finally agreed. "And not because it's your birthday, but because I'm not in the mood to send you to the office."

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited February 2020

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    Becky and I giggled as we went off toward the bleachers where the class was waiting.

    Trevor Mitchell, my kindergarten nemesis, and his shuffling sidekick, Matt Wells, followed us.

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    They were perfectly combed, conservative, rich soccer snobs. They knew they were great looking, and it made me sick that they were so cocky.

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    "Sweet sixteen!" Trevor said, obviously having overheard my chat with Mr. Harris. "How lovely! Just ripe for love, don't you think, Matt?" They were close on our heels.

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    "Yeah, dude," Matt agreed.

  • Orchidah1Orchidah1 Posts: 193 Member
    edited February 2020

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    "But maybe there's a reason she doesn't wear white--white is for virgins, right, Raven?"

    He was gorgeous, no doubt about it. His blue eyes were beautiful, and his hair looked as perfect as a model's. He had a girl for every day of the week. He was a bad boy, but he was a rich bad boy, which made him very boring.

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    "Hey, I'm not the one wearing white underwear, am I?" I asked. "You're right--there's a reason I wear black. Maybe you're the one who oughta get out more. "

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    Becky and I sat on the far end of the bleachers, leaving Trevor and Matt standing on the track.

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    "So how are you spending your birthday?" Trevor shouted, sitting with the rest of the class, loud enough for everyone to hear.

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    "You and farmer Becky sitting home on a Friday night, watching Friday the Thirteenth? Maybe placing some personal ads? 'Sixteen- year-old single white monster girl seeks mate to bond with for eternity.'"

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    The whole class laughed.

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