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My Poem Challenge

RoggieBearRoggieBear Posts: 243 Member
I am going to try and find time, not every day, but for most of the days in the first couple weeks in December to just let my thoughts out on paper and just type a poem. I am self-diagnosed with depression, hoping to be actually diagnosed by a therapist when I get one, but I always have a lot of sad thoughts, and I've found it helps to just write them. When I write poems, it usually goes one way or the other -- It starts bad as I'm trying to force the thoughts out of my head onto the paper and ends alright since I'm just typing, or it starts good if I just start typing and ends bad since I start trying to make it sound better and by then it just isn't my own thoughts. Feel free to comment your own poems or what you think I could do to make my poems better since I want to become a poet or a short story author as an adult. Thank you for reading everyone and I hope you enjoy some of my poems.
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Inspired +1 - Who isn't inspired after seeing the cutest thing ever come out of the banana they were eating?

RoggieBear

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  • RoggieBearRoggieBear Posts: 243 Member
    Poem One: Is There Really a Point

    Why does it seem
    No matter what I do
    No matter what I try
    Everyone hates me

    Why does it seem
    No matter what I do
    Life just never
    Has any meaning

    Is there really a point
    After getting through this
    Will it ever seem
    I’m a little worthy

    Will he ever like me
    For who I am
    Instead of wanting
    What I should be

    Will he ever like me
    For myself
    Instead of just
    My depressed being

    Is there really a point
    After getting through this
    Will it ever seem
    I could be worthy

    Or will I just fall
    Deeper into the cave
    The cave that swallowed
    And is digesting me

    Can I escape
    The cave of doom
    Where depression lies
    And everyone hates you

    Or will I be stuck
    Down in the lagoon
    For years and years
    Until death helps me through
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    Inspired +1 - Who isn't inspired after seeing the cutest thing ever come out of the banana they were eating?

    RoggieBear
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