Do you think they would even be a good match for each other in the future?
I have to say that after Paris they seem too different to me to believe they can work. Franco has been through a lot and the fact that he settled down and married Rosa shows he wants no more excitement like Paris in his life. For the same reason he left her, after she started acting like a crazy jealous witch. He wants his peace. Mae is too wild. She would drive him crazy.
I tend to agree, but they are drawn to each other even after Paris. But yes, they both have to get divorced and all sorts of things could happen during that process to either bring them together or push them apart more. Yes, Mae is a bit wild, but I think she wants to settle down too. I think they both simply settled for the wrong person....
wait we talk about ships a lot now were unshipping couples? lol a lot happens when i'm at work.
Do you think they would even be a good match for each other in the future?
I have to say that after Paris they seem too different to me to believe they can work. Franco has been through a lot and the fact that he settled down and married Rosa shows he wants no more excitement like Paris in his life. For the same reason he left her, after she started acting like a crazy jealous witch. He wants his peace. Mae is too wild. She would drive him crazy.
I tend to agree, but they are drawn to each other even after Paris. But yes, they both have to get divorced and all sorts of things could happen during that process to either bring them together or push them apart more. Yes, Mae is a bit wild, but I think she wants to settle down too. I think they both simply settled for the wrong person....
wait we talk about ships a lot now were unshipping couples? lol a lot happens when i'm at work.
I know! Crazy isn't it!
and reshipping lol. i just read he rest. yes its crazy.
Hi everyone. I'm glad you all enjoyed the discussion about @candycottonchu's Neighbourhood Talk. It's one of my favourite simLits.
This week we discuss another one of my favourites, @Bugsie2016's Life's Lessons.
I thought Tasty read means picking one chapter and discussing it the given week. That's why the feature is called a Tasty read. That's what other authors nominated for it were asked to do. I'm sorry to bring this up, but for discussing a whole story we have a two week feature, so readers have time to catch up and join the discussion.
I thought Tasty read means picking one chapter and discussing it the given week. That's why the feature is called a Tasty read. That's what other authors nominated for it were asked to do. I'm sorry to bring this up, but for discussing a whole story we have a two week feature, so readers have time to catch up and join the discussion.
You're right. I think I should probably just pick my first chapter as it makes sense. (I edited the original post since none of it was about the first chapter).
Hi, @Bugsie2016 ! I'm excited we'really reading your story, and I'm looking forward to going back to look at the first chapter. I remember it made a big impression on me when I first read it.
Are you thinking of questions you'll have for readers? I'll be thinking of questions for you!
Hi, @Bugsie2016 ! I'm excited we'really reading your story, and I'm looking forward to going back to look at the first chapter. I remember it made a big impression on me when I first read it.
Are you thinking of questions you'll have for readers? I'll be thinking of questions for you!
For first time readers (anyone who has read just this chapter):
What are your opinions of Ron in this chapter?
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
For regular readers (I'm including these because I can ask questions about my other 2 main characters that aren't in this chapter):
What do you think of Ron and Connor later on in the story in comparison to the first chapter?
What do you think of Dani & Claire?
What do you think of the two main couple's relationships?
1. He seems to be a very tidy person.
2. He's rather not. Also, lazy c:
3. I like how the reader is pulled into the scene with a detailed description. But I felt that as soon as something happened, it was over. I'll give a few more chapters a try when I have time again.
What are your opinions of Ron in this chapter?
He's definitely a neat freak. If I was him, I would wake Connor and stood over him until he washed the dirty dishes himself.
I liked the outfit you picked for him.
I also hope you know it by now, that writers have other means than capital letters to let the readers know a character is yelling.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
He's totally abusing his friendship with Ron. Helping around the apartment is the least he could do for being allowed to stay there.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
I think it gives a reader a pretty good image of how their friendship works.
1. He seems to be a very tidy person.
2. He's rather not. Also, lazy c:
3. I like how the reader is pulled into the scene with a detailed description. But I felt that as soon as something happened, it was over. I'll give a few more chapters a try when I have time again.
I actually completely forgot I made Ron a tidy person. I don't think I've written anything since that contradicts that so think it still stands. xD
As for Connor, he can be but he can also be the opposite. Depends on the day. xD
I haven't actually read the chapter again yet but now that'll be something that will stand out. (I remember the chapter from when I had to go back and change one minor detail to make the story make sense later.)
What are your opinions of Ron in this chapter?
He's definitely a neat freak. If I was him, I would wake Connor and stood over him until he washed the dirty dishes himself.
I liked the outfit you picked for him.
I also hope you know it by now, that writers have other means than capital letters to let the readers know a character is yelling.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
He's totally abusing his friendship with Ron. Helping around the apartment is the least he could do for being allowed to stay there.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
I think it gives a reader a pretty good image of how their friendship works.
Yeah, I'm aware there is other ways. But, for some reason this was the way I wrote it. (Guessing all caps was just fun to use for once. xD)
He somewhat is abusing his friendship. He is and he isn't. Originally that was the storyline but the story took a different route and there's actually a lot of off-screen stuff that happens. (It's all in my head on whats going on.) I think he probably does do some stuff, this just happened to be the one day he didn't.
I'm probably going to go back and rewrite the first few chapters as they don't reflect the story in general too well. I've not considered it before but think it's probably important to make it fit the story better.
He has a reason to be angry with his friend but I think he is an enabler. He went and washed the dishes, cleaned the mess his friend made and is paying all the bills. Connor is not going to get a job or clean up after himself if Ron keeps supporting him. Time to show some tough love and throw him out.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
Connor needs to grow up, get a job and start living on his own. He is taking advantage of Ron and he needs to be put in the position where he is forced to act like an adult.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
At first I thought Ron was walking into a crime scene and he was going to be complaining about the mess and find his friend injured or dead. However that wasn't the case. I enjoyed the first chapter and I'm planning on reading on to see what happens next.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
At first I thought Ron was walking into a crime scene and he was going to be complaining about the mess and find his friend injured or dead. However that wasn't the case. I enjoyed the first chapter and I'm planning on reading on to see what happens next.
No need to say I would LOVE this scenario. Said it anyway.
He has a reason to be angry with his friend but I think he is an enabler. He went and washed the dishes, cleaned the mess his friend made and is paying all the bills. Connor is not going to get a job or clean up after himself if Ron keeps supporting him. Time to show some tough love and throw him out.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
Connor needs to grow up, get a job and start living on his own. He is taking advantage of Ron and he needs to be put in the position where he is forced to act like an adult.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
At first I thought Ron was walking into a crime scene and he was going to be complaining about the mess and find his friend injured or dead. However that wasn't the case. I enjoyed the first chapter and I'm planning on reading on to see what happens next.
I would argue that I don't kill off characters in the first chapter of a story but that's a lie. I've done that before.
But, if I was going to have him walk on a crime scene I wouldn't have chosen Connor as the victim. Don't know who though. I would be evil and say his girlfriend but that's a bit too cruel for the first chapter. But, anyway, Connor actually has an important role later on.
I'll leave a hint for anyone whose read the first 20 something chapters (spoilers if I say the exact amount):
It has something to do with Ron's kinda step-dad being the San My drug dealer.
'kinda' because he never technically married Ron's mum. They had a wedding but they're not technically married even if she thinks they are. It's complicated...
But, if I was going to have him walk on a crime scene I wouldn't have chosen Connor as the victim. Don't know who though. I would be evil and say his girlfriend but that's a bit too cruel for the first chapter.
There's no such a thing as too cruel in sims and simlit. I mean the game gives you tools to kill your sims in so many different ways. They practically encourage you to kill them and then tell everybody about it.
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I know! Crazy isn't it!
and reshipping lol. i just read he rest. yes its crazy.
This week we discuss another one of my favourites, @Bugsie2016's Life's Lessons.
stop making out and put your siggy back.
sorry its been a while since i saw you. i was talking about your avi. which might be my new fav.
my siggy is there.
i don't see the ll link.
My siggie is on rotation. I'll post a link.
https://lifeslessonsstory.wordpress.com/
you didn't say that.lol
https://lifeslessonsstory.wordpress.com/2018/02/14/chapter-1/
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You're right. I think I should probably just pick my first chapter as it makes sense.
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It's in the edited version of my first post.
Hi, @Bugsie2016 ! I'm excited we'really reading your story, and I'm looking forward to going back to look at the first chapter. I remember it made a big impression on me when I first read it.
Are you thinking of questions you'll have for readers? I'll be thinking of questions for you!
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!
I'm going to post some later for the week.
For first time readers (anyone who has read just this chapter):
What are your opinions of Ron in this chapter?
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
For regular readers (I'm including these because I can ask questions about my other 2 main characters that aren't in this chapter):
What do you think of Dani & Claire?
What do you think of the two main couple's relationships?
1. He seems to be a very tidy person.
2. He's rather not. Also, lazy c:
3. I like how the reader is pulled into the scene with a detailed description. But I felt that as soon as something happened, it was over. I'll give a few more chapters a try when I have time again.
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He's definitely a neat freak. If I was him, I would wake Connor and stood over him until he washed the dirty dishes himself.
I liked the outfit you picked for him.
I also hope you know it by now, that writers have other means than capital letters to let the readers know a character is yelling.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
He's totally abusing his friendship with Ron. Helping around the apartment is the least he could do for being allowed to stay there.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
I think it gives a reader a pretty good image of how their friendship works.
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I actually completely forgot I made Ron a tidy person. I don't think I've written anything since that contradicts that so think it still stands. xD
As for Connor, he can be but he can also be the opposite. Depends on the day. xD
I haven't actually read the chapter again yet but now that'll be something that will stand out.
Yeah, I'm aware there is other ways. But, for some reason this was the way I wrote it. (Guessing all caps was just fun to use for once. xD)
He somewhat is abusing his friendship. He is and he isn't. Originally that was the storyline but the story took a different route and there's actually a lot of off-screen stuff that happens. (It's all in my head on whats going on.) I think he probably does do some stuff, this just happened to be the one day he didn't.
I'm probably going to go back and rewrite the first few chapters as they don't reflect the story in general too well.
i do that.
i just read it. i readit the first time before my eyes went wonky. but forgot what i read. well some of it like candys story i remembered some of it.
He has a reason to be angry with his friend but I think he is an enabler. He went and washed the dishes, cleaned the mess his friend made and is paying all the bills. Connor is not going to get a job or clean up after himself if Ron keeps supporting him. Time to show some tough love and throw him out.
What are your opinions of Connor in this chapter?
Connor needs to grow up, get a job and start living on his own. He is taking advantage of Ron and he needs to be put in the position where he is forced to act like an adult.
What's your general opinion on the chapter in general?
At first I thought Ron was walking into a crime scene and he was going to be complaining about the mess and find his friend injured or dead. However that wasn't the case. I enjoyed the first chapter and I'm planning on reading on to see what happens next.
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I would argue that I don't kill off characters in the first chapter of a story but that's a lie. I've done that before.
But, if I was going to have him walk on a crime scene I wouldn't have chosen Connor as the victim. Don't know who though. I would be evil and say his girlfriend but that's a bit too cruel for the first chapter. But, anyway, Connor actually has an important role later on.
I'll leave a hint for anyone whose read the first 20 something chapters (spoilers if I say the exact amount):
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