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    The Broken Ones! A Sims 4 Story *Completed*

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    LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
    edited September 2019 in The Sims 4 Challenges, Stories and Legacies
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    So this is a story that's been in my head for a few years, so I decided to put it out there. I've only written the prologue, to see what people think of it, and if they like it I will continue. So feel free to read it!

    The Broken Ones:

    PROLOGUE
    CHAPTER ONE: AN UNEXPECTED VISITOR
    CHAPTER TWO: UNWANTED ATTENTION
    CHAPTER THREE: GOOD COP, BAD COP
    CHAPTER FOUR: COMPLICATED
    CHAPTER FIVE: THE MURKY DEPTHS
    CHAPTER SIX: TWISTS & TURNS
    CHAPTER SEVEN: WAY TOO CLOSE
    CHAPTER EIGHT: IDLE THREATS
    CHAPTER NINE: REVELATIONS
    CHAPTER TEN: TRUST
    CHAPTER ELEVEN: WE'VE ALL LIED
    CHAPTER TWELVE: WORTH THE RISK
    EPILOGUE
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    • VanPelt81VanPelt81 Posts: 2,990 Member
      Interesting premise so far.
    • MunterbaconMunterbacon Posts: 5,082 Member
      A nice start! Definitely interested in reading more of this! :)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      VanPelt81 wrote: »
      Interesting premise so far.

      Thank you, and thank you for reading! :)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Munterbacon wrote: »
      A nice start! Definitely interested in reading more of this! :)

      Thank you, I'm working on the first chapter at the moment. :)
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    • pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      Love it! Keep going!

      And poor Samuel. I bet he didn't do it. How can he be so sure? He doesn't have a memory of it.
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      pammiechick wrote: »
      Love it! Keep going!

      And poor Samuel. I bet he didn't do it. How can he be so sure? He doesn't have a memory of it.

      Thank you! Hmm, yeah "flashbacks" don't necessarily mean truth! ;) We shall see! :#
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      CHAPTER ONE: AN UNEXPECTED VISITOR is up and ready to read.

      Sarah and Adam meet!

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    • MunterbaconMunterbacon Posts: 5,082 Member
      I had a feeling that Adam would chicken out. He's playing a dangerous game, but I also don't think that he actually did it! My guess would be:
      That perhaps he recognises John's face because they were drinking in the same bar on that night. And that Adam's recollection of running him over wasn't him, but maybe a deer or something similar.
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    • NRoweNRowe Posts: 7,895 Member
      Bookmarked. ;)
    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Munterbacon wrote: »
      I had a feeling that Adam would chicken out. He's playing a dangerous game, but I also don't think that he actually did it! My guess would be:
      That perhaps he recognises John's face because they were drinking in the same bar on that night. And that Adam's recollection of running him over wasn't him, but maybe a deer or something similar.

      Oooh that's a pretty amazing theory. Yes he chickened out, he's terrified of going to jail but he's a decent human being and truly believes he should face his crime. The question now is, will he be able to tell Sarah why he's really in Brindleton Bay now that they've struck up an acquaintance.

      Thank you for reading and commenting, it makes my day! :)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      NRowe wrote: »
      Bookmarked. ;)

      Thank you! :blush:
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Just a word of warning, I have a thing about having my male sims wandering around in their undercrackers often. I just thought I should put that out there, how sick a puppy I am! B) #notsorry

      Just casually loitering in their pants looking pensive! >:)

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    • pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      LJFoxie wrote: »
      Just a word of warning, I have a thing about having my male sims wandering around in their undercrackers often. I just thought I should put that out there, how sick a puppy I am! B) #notsorry

      Just casually loitering in their pants looking pensive! >:)

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      I don’t mind... :naughty:
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    • MunterbaconMunterbacon Posts: 5,082 Member
      LJFoxie wrote: »
      Just a word of warning, I have a thing about having my male sims wandering around in their undercrackers often. I just thought I should put that out there, how sick a puppy I am! B) #notsorry

      Just casually loitering in their pants looking pensive! >:)

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      Hey, it's his house, he can do as he pleases. ;):D
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      CHAPTER TWO: UNWANTED ATTENTION is published!

      Someone's big mouth has caused an argument between Sarah and Mark...

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    • MunterbaconMunterbacon Posts: 5,082 Member
      Mark sounds like a real piece of work! :rage:
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    • pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      Mark seems to have an unhealthy fixation on his little sister (YUCK!)

      I hope Adam can find out somehow and rescue her! (And was that a confession that MARK was the real culprit here, not Adam?)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Munterbacon wrote: »
      Mark sounds like a real piece of work! :rage:

      Mark has, um, problems? Yes that's the only way I can describe him right now without revealing anything. ;)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      pammiechick wrote: »
      Mark seems to have an unhealthy fixation on his little sister (YUCK!)

      I hope Adam can find out somehow and rescue her! (And was that a confession that MARK was the real culprit here, not Adam?)

      Mark does indeed have a fixation on something, something that will come to the fore in due course. He's a complicated dude, there is a reason why he is the way he is. Oh and there will be an Adam/Mark encounter in chapter 3. >:)
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Well, so that didn't go according to plan! Adam just died of embarrassment! :scream: Back to the drawing board I go! :cry:

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    • MunterbaconMunterbacon Posts: 5,082 Member
      LJFoxie wrote: »
      Well, so that didn't go according to plan! Adam just died of embarrassment! :scream: Back to the drawing board I go! :cry:

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      Bahaha! MCCC emotion cheats, yeah? Those bad boys are dangerous!!! :D
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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Munterbacon wrote: »
      LJFoxie wrote: »
      Well, so that didn't go according to plan! Adam just died of embarrassment! :scream: Back to the drawing board I go! :cry:

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      Bahaha! MCCC emotion cheats, yeah? Those bad boys are dangerous!!! :D

      Ain't that the truth! :wink:
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    • suzanna13suzanna13 Posts: 1,426 Member
      Your story is different and has my interest. I love a mystery and hope you continue.
    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      Chapter Three: Good Cop, Bad Cop is ready to read!

      Una arrives late for work, and has much to tell Sarah...

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    • LJFoxieLJFoxie Posts: 929 Member
      suzanna13 wrote: »
      Your story is different and has my interest. I love a mystery and hope you continue.

      Thank you! :)
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