What do you think of Ron and Connor later on in the story in comparison to the first chapter?
We really see a different side of Ron in this first chapter than we do when we see him with Claire.
He seems really angry and sort of abusive with Connor. We don't see the caring and patient guy that he shows himself to be when he's with Claire.
And Connor, who seems sort of irresponsible in this chapter, becomes one of my favorite characters!
What do you think of Dani & Claire?
I especially like Dani. She's got an enthusiasm I admire!
Claire? I really like the way she looks in the screenshots--she's very photogenic! It's obvious that Ron adores her--and I can see why.
She seems to keep a lot to herself. She's dealing with a lot, especially in terms of her health and emotions. It will be interesting to see how she develops.
What do you think of the two main couple's relationships?
Connor and Dani seem to have such a supportive relationship. Connor is very accepting and really provides safety for Dani.
I'm not sure how I feel about Claire and Ron's relationship. It seems a bit enmeshed to me at times--especially for Ron. Sometimes, I get the feeling that Claire feels a little smothered, and while she appreciates Ron's affection and devotion, she sometimes doesn't feel she has the space to be herself--it's like everything closes in on her.
Questions for you, @Bugsie2016 : How far out have you planned the story? Do you have a definite ending in mind? What issues and themes are you aware of exploring as you write this? What do you feel most rewarding about writing this story?
Bugsie2016 wrote: »
Would anyone mind if I make the next chapter picture-less? I can't find a good lot to use and I can't build large builds well enough. So, the best option is to just make it picture-less and leave it up to the imagination.