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    Metro: A San Myshuno Drama (UPDATE:The END)

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    Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
    edited October 2019 in The Sims 4 Challenges, Stories and Legacies
    https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/

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    This is the story about twelve young adults trying to get by in the city of San Myshuno. Some are lifelong friends, some are new roommates, and some are just complete strangers. This story is packed full of drama, romance and everything in between. Watch as these characters try to find themselves in a city that is too easy to get lost in.

    Rating: Mature readers only!
    This story deals with a lot of mature material.

    Hope you guys enjoy :)
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
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      Valpre1983Valpre1983 Posts: 889 Member
      Enjoyed the updates.
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      WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
      It was a good chapter to me! And don't worry about taking your time it's your story so you take how long you need to telll it your way! It's worth the wait! <3
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      Hey! I didn't know you were on here lol

      Thanks for the encouragement :)
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      pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      Just wanted to pop in here and say I'm reading and enjoying this!!
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      Thank you :)@pammiechick
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      WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
      Something is definitely happening at Sean's party I can feel it! Can't wait for the drama! >:)
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      InfraGreenInfraGreen Posts: 6,693 Member
      I give Theo props for not being 100% crazy and offputting from the start. Always a plus!
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      ANNOUNCEMENT

      So after going back and forth, re-reading Metro, and reading other amazing stories on here, I have decided to cancel and re-write.

      When I created metro I really wanted to write a story about a group of young adults with real world problems and stuff people can relate to. Instead I feel like all my characters are too similar and have unrealistic lives. I think I rushed into the story too fast and it's just not turning out the way I really wanted it to. I would hate to be a flaky sim-lit writer, but in order for me to become a better writer I think I really need to do this. I want to thank everyone that followed my story and commented, it made me feel awesome.

      I will be creating a new story and the majority of the characters will still be in it (they will just have slightly different storylines). I hope no-one is too upset =(

      PS: Reo will still be a thing =)
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      LegacySims2017LegacySims2017 Posts: 5,226 Member
      This Metro will be mised.
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      WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
      It's cool can't wait to see what changes the rewrite has I bet I'll still be amazing!
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      Thanks guys!

      I already drafted the character bios. I hope you guys still like it!

      Also @WitcHazard I must thank you for being such a dedicated fan <3<3
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      pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      Acarb90 wrote: »
      ANNOUNCEMENT

      So after going back and forth, re-reading Metro, and reading other amazing stories on here, I have decided to cancel and re-write.

      When I created metro I really wanted to write a story about a group of young adults with real world problems and stuff people can relate to. Instead I feel like all my characters are too similar and have unrealistic lives. I think I rushed into the story too fast and it's just not turning out the way I really wanted it to. I would hate to be a flaky sim-lit writer, but in order for me to become a better writer I think I really need to do this. I want to thank everyone that followed my story and commented, it made me feel awesome.

      I will be creating a new story and the majority of the characters will still be in it (they will just have slightly different storylines). I hope no-one is too upset =(

      PS: Reo will still be a thing =)

      Oh no! Well...I guess you need to be happy with it. Here's to an even better story and more fun to you for writing it!
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      my newly edited blog is now up =)

      https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/

      I posted the character bios, enjoy!
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      WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
      Just read the new bios with the changes with some of the characters I wonder how they'll effect the dynamics of the relationships of the group as a whole not to mention individually! Can't wait for chapter 1! <3
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      pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
      Very interesting!!! Here's to this fresh new start. I like what I've read. All the characters seem real...love it!
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      Acarb90Acarb90 Posts: 608 Member
      https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/2017/09/16/chapter-one-part-one-homecoming/

      Metro is finally here! =)
      Hope you guys like it!
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