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    peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
    in The Sims 3 Builders

    I have no idea what the title means. I'm assuming some subconscious part of my mind connected it to my story.

    So this is the story I'm starting. :)
    It's called In Honor of Truth and is between realistic fiction and fantasty fiction (if that makes sense.)
    All I have as of now is the introduction and I will measure the reaction to see if I should continue.

    Intro: http://stalledinaction.wordpress.com/introduction/

    I hope you enjoy it. :)


    EDIT: This has been moved to a different thread!

    http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/87081.page

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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      I can take constructive criticism as well, but silence is just unnerving.

      And if you hate it, phrase it in the nicest way possible. I'm a bit sensitive.
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      So out of 17 views, no one has an opinion?

      I feel bad shamelessly bumping, but I want some sort of reaction, be it disdain or otherwise.
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      C'mon. Just one little reaction. :wink:
      I'm getting kind of nervous. :?
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      Well this was futile.

      I am going to head to bed. I hope I get a better response tomorrow...
      Any response would be a better response, in fact.
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      MadamPurpleMadamPurple Posts: 26 New Member
      edited August 2009
      Hope you have a good sleep, just to give you a reply rea quick as you are "reply less".

      I am one of your thread views, but didnt actually open your link as it led to an outside site, I think many people who come on the forums want to stay on the forums.

      So, second view, I DID open the link, I admit I didnt read the actual story, but the pictures are lovely :)
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      MmyokoMmyoko Posts: 1,881 New Member
      edited August 2009
      LOL I hate when the forums are unresponsive, just sitting around waiting for replies.

      I like it, great photography and very professional wording!

      - Mmyoko out.
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      marty38marty38 Posts: 550 Member
      edited August 2009
      Hi

      Love the pics and general story line. The wording is a little ethereal for my taste but I like where the story is going.

      martyxxx
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      Thank you all. :)

      Yeah. The outside link can be a bit nervewracking, but I promise it's a legit site.
      Many people on here use it and recommend it. :)

      Also, I only used the "You..." for the introduction. I will go into third person in the actual story.

      The feedback from ya'll makes me happy. :)
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      I wonder if anyone hates shameless bumping as much as I do...
      I feel guilty everytime I do it.
      -winces and hits 'Submit'-
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      All this bumping is making me feel like a complete failure...
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      Aly0320Aly0320 Posts: 133 New Member
      edited August 2009
      marty38 wrote:
      Hi

      Love the pics and general story line. The wording is a little ethereal for my taste but I like where the story is going.

      martyxxx
      i agree... :oops:
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      MumsyMumsy Posts: 666 New Member
      edited August 2009
      I understand that feeling peaceloveleah. It's hard to deal with. I hadn't seen this until now or would have responded.

      I tried to get to it but couldn't. I enjoy stories and from the responses you got I am going to bookmark to try again at another time. My computer isn't very good so I'll keep my fingers crossed. The main thing is that you enjoyed making it.. if you did, then it's all good.

      Well looking back I probably wasn't any help at all but at least it was a free bump :)

      ~Mumsy

      P.S. Great avi!
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      SimEveSimEve Posts: 4,772 Member
      edited August 2009
      Bookmarking to read later tonight. I will post again later. :D
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      Whoa. I vanish to clear up my Twitter and I get some responses.

      Thank you all so much.

      And my writing style has always been a bit dark and mysterious. I really don't know why.
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      fieryfemalefieryfemale Posts: 1,593 New Member
      edited August 2009
      I think you have got off to a good start. I think it reads well and once you get more into the story and we get to know your characters a bit more it will become even more interesting.
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      fieryfemale wrote:
      I think you have got off to a good start. I think it reads well. Once you get more into the story, I think it will become very interesting.

      Thank you. :)
      It's understandable that it's sort of difficult to judge the story from that blurb.
      I will probably get working on the new chapter tonight.
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      BennjoonBennjoon Posts: 1,909 Member
      edited August 2009
      OOOO I like it :) It reminds me of medley's story (and thats only a good thing) I agree the language is very highbrow but understandable and the intro has intrigued me! I do love stories I hope your forum bumping wont demoralise you enough to stop you from continuing :)
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      Bennjoon wrote:
      OOOO I like it :) It reminds me of medley's story (and thats only a good thing) I agree the language is very highbrow but understandable and the intro has intrigued me! I do love stories I hope your forum bumping wont demoralise you enough to stop you from continuing :)

      Awh. Thank you.

      I'm hoping the next installments seem a bit more creative and branch away from Medley's premise. I admire her writing very much and would hate to have her think I copied it.

      All these comments are so heart warming. :)
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      SimEveSimEve Posts: 4,772 Member
      edited August 2009
      It seems interesting. I admit you have to be in the mood to read this style of writing. it is not for everyone, but I like it. It is almost poetic and some of your screen shots are poetic to me. Don't worry about bumping. If you didn't I wouldn't have seen it so I'm glad you did.
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      peaceloveleahpeaceloveleah Posts: 3,522 New Member
      edited August 2009
      All right, I may get some serious anger from this but I made a new thread.
      It's more organized and has the next chapter up. :)

      http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/87081.page

      I hope you check it out!
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