My Kaylynn Langerak Story: Updated «12...Next Go

rjhenn14

My Sims 4 game is filled with a Pleasantview story-remake, and I decided to write a blog about Kaylynn Langerak, it is just in the works, but I hope you all enjoy!

Preface: https://rjhennsims.wordpress.com/2015/09/02/mistress-maid-the-story-of-kaylynn-langerak/



Chapter one: https://rjhennsims.wordpress.com/2015/09/03/mistress-maid-the-story-of-kaylynn-langerak-chapter-one/



Chapter two: https://rjhennsims.wordpress.com/2016/06/09/mistress-maid-the-story-of-kaylynn-langerak-chapter-one-2/



-Rachel

abeautifulletdown

I liked it, I hope you keep it going.

rjhenn14

I will! I have the next set of photos mostly taken. Glad you liked it!

The stories in Pleasantview were always my favorite, so I wanted to retell them with a twist from Kaylynn's perspective.

Thank you again for taking the time to read!

PeachesnDucks

Really great start. Can't wait to read more!

abeautifulletdown

rjhenn14 wrote: »

I will! I have the next set of photos mostly taken. Glad you liked it!

The stories in Pleasantview were always my favorite, so I wanted to retell them with a twist from Kaylynn's perspective.

Thank you again for taking the time to read!

No problem! I love stories like that. Makes me feel more connected to sims. Keeps me from thinking they're just mindless, mess-making zombies. I bookmarked it.

Krish_

I love her!

Scobre

That's cool and yeah that NPC seemed interesting to me in the Sims 2. I always felt there was more to her story too.

ENolan

And here I was hoping it was my Kaylynn Langerak recreation.....



Still... Here's hoping you have fun with her.

BrittanyChick22

Heres my makeover of kaylynn from Sunset Valley. Shes naturally a beautiful sim, honestly if she were real I'm not sure where would be from, she could be Latina.

surraaaaaa

Great start! Can't wait for the next post!

Brieanna19

Cant wait to read the next post!!

kryptmoon

This looks like it's going to be good. Can't wait for more. :)

rjhenn14

I am working on the next part as we speak it should be up later this day. Keep posted! Glad everyone is enjoying it so far!

rjhenn14

Chapter one is up! Enjoy guys! Let me know how you like it!

https://rjhennsims.wordpress.com/2015/09/03/mistress-maid-the-story-of-kaylynn-langerak-chapter-one/

Weathie

Oooh, really enjoying your story! Looking forward to more

ENolan

You had me at Kaylynn, lost me a little with a few design choices, then made up with the fantastic story writing. Well done, @rjhenn14

mooredt21

I want teaser pictures here on the thread. Please?

Also, I read the preface and part 1. Excellent intro. I love what you did with the Sims and their residences. Where'd you find that maid uniform?

rjhenn14

@mooredt21 The maid uniform is from here: http://sims4downloads.net/simista-maid-uniform-mesh-edit/

and I will work on putting promo pics on this thread! Thanks for the advice!

@ENolan What do you mean design choices? But thank you for the compliment on my writing!

mooredt21

rjhenn14 wrote: »

@mooredt21 The maid uniform is from here: http://sims4downloads.net/simista-maid-uniform-mesh-edit/

and I will work on putting promo pics on this thread! Thanks for the advice!

Cool. Thanks. I look forward to reading more.

abeautifulletdown

chapter 1 was awesome too, keep it up

Felicia1990

Looking forward to reading more!

ENolan

@rjhenn14 I just felt that your recreation of Kaylynn was off in a few areas, but it's your recreation and I think you're entitled to how you viewed her. I shared my version above for reference, but please don't take this as an insult. I liked your story and will definitely continue to read it.

rjhenn14

@ENolan That's okay, I guess everyone has their own interpretation. I spent a lot of time making her while looking at the TS2 version, so I got her as close as I felt. Aside from that, I am glad you are enjoying the story!

ENolan

@rjhenn14 Until Kaylynn, I was only recreating TS3 sims. When I made Kaylynn, I looked at both her TS2 and TS3 versions, matched looks, personalities, and stories and blended it together. (Imagine that process and all the tabbing out and in.) I definitely understand what you did and I commend you for it.

Edit: I had to say that I was impressed by your writing so much that it made me wish there were more active careers, including Maid Service. That line where she tells Don she doesn't want him regretting hiring a self-employed professional over the mainstream Maids United sounded like it was perfectly torn from the alerts in the game. I'm eager for the introduction to the Pleasants or, (this might be a long shot) Bella Goth's disappearance from Don's place. Maybe I can lend you some help in the Pleasant department.

Mightydan

That was so cool! I've always wanted an active maid career in the game. In TS3 I had a household of millionaires where I only controlled the maid. She caused a lot of drama but I had so much fun!

rjhenn14

I have another update! It's been a long time... I have been so busy with school, work and kids... but hoping to get back into this!

Without further ado... Chapter Two! http://wp.me/p6EB35-1K

Enjoy! Let me know what you all think!

-Rjhenn14