I'm happy that Jennifer survived... I was worried that her real father will kill her But what has happened to this woman scientist? She died?
Thanks for this short and great story, @Julyvee94 I read it from its beginning to the end
@roseinblack69 That's why I wanted an epilogue xD I just found the ending with Jennifer meeting someone so good that I didn't want to put anything behind it.
Helen did not die, you see for the scientists it looks like Jennifer is gone, the machine is off, the TV screen is out and they can't see her anymore so Ballinger has achieved his plan - in his eyes at least.
What a gripping finale July! This has been such a fascinating cohesive piece of work. I really enjoyed your pacing in this, revealing the information little by little, but not too slowly, and always making your readers wonder, even once it's all over. I find that with some story driven pices, the plot moves a bit too slowly for my liking, whereas with this one it seemed just perfect, and it's never lost the feel of mystery even after many questions were answered. I feel like this one will stay on my mind for a while!
@ThePlumbob thanks! Glad you liked it I thought I'd like it rather short so I can actually feel the satisfaction of finishing a story. Tribe Arayeo will be around for a while longer.
If you keep thinking about it I have achieved my goal ^^
Oh btw, I wanted to reveal my inspirations ^^ @sabreene and @BBQPenguinWings already guessed them right!
The books are the "Wayward Pines" series by Blake Crouch. I just learned that this is also a TV series, I had no idea! Made my day ^^
From WP is the part about the suspension and the new world and all that stuff.
The movie is "Source Code" with Jake Gyllenhall
That's where Jennifers virtual world and her gaining greater control came from ^^
I'm surprised I haven't seen Source Code. It sounds sci-fi/computer-y (my sort of thing) and has Jake Gyllenhall (a favorite of mine!), so I don't know how I missed it. Definitely on my 'to watch' list now.
This makes me want to watch Source Code (partially because it sounds interesting and partially because Jake Gyllenhall is hot ), and that movie you indirectly reminded me of, The Thirteenth Floor - though that one's quite old so I'm not sure if it aged well...
@Julyvee94 after you said that Source code was a reference for you I realized that it is in one week on German Tv (Vox) and Austrian tv (ORF 1) and that I have already seen it lol :D
@Meggles I hope you liked it ^^ I didn't even know that Wayward pines was a show, I only read the books and thought no one knew of them xD Now I have to watch it!
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Thanks for this short and great story, @Julyvee94 I read it from its beginning to the end
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Helen did not die, you see for the scientists it looks like Jennifer is gone, the machine is off, the TV screen is out and they can't see her anymore so Ballinger has achieved his plan - in his eyes at least.
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If you keep thinking about it I have achieved my goal ^^
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I tried to write the sims stories before, but I didn't finish them
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That's why Discovery was fairly short
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But I'm sure we'll both finish our stories about amazons
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The books are the "Wayward Pines" series by Blake Crouch. I just learned that this is also a TV series, I had no idea! Made my day ^^
From WP is the part about the suspension and the new world and all that stuff.
The movie is "Source Code" with Jake Gyllenhall
That's where Jennifers virtual world and her gaining greater control came from ^^
There were also references to Inception
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This was a great story!
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Aaaaand that's officially it ^^ I'm so happy to have completed this story and thanks to all my awesome readers for tagging along
This will be replaced by my new story "Vee is for Vortex". It's a completely different style but still you might want to take a look ^^
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Thanks, Marialein
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I'm sure I'll like it
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