pronterus wrote: »
Congrats on the well-deserved win @masajo !
BuildnShare wrote: »
Established Results for Challenge #56 - New Beginnings
☆ @17lani71 ☆
A gorgeous cottage style starter with a very cheery appearance using a warm colour combination of exterior textures. The surrounding hedging really enhances the build and your roof structure is spot on. Great interior layout with all rooms easily accessible. The open plan living and kitchen areas are nice and spacious, giving a light and airy feel. The living room looks lovely and cosy and very comfy. Love the outdoor dining area, the fencing is a good choice as the brief requested natural materials.
Suggestions: Firstly, we like to see pics of all the side elevations of the build, together with an overhead shot with the roof up. Regarding the interiors, I would have separated the living and kitchen areas slightly by using half walls or dividers for example. I would also suggest using varying wall textures to add more interest inside, ie use tiles along the kitchen wall which contrast with the wall paper.
Sim Challenge: Beautiful interpretation of Fern, she does indeed have an air of tranquility about her. The third trait you chose is perfect, a music lover. The Curator aspiration is also a good choice as it's always great to get extra money for the collectables. It would have been wonderful to see pics of her whole wardrobe and the clothes choices you made.
Room Challenge: Wonderful work with Fern's bedroom, looks very elegant with your choice of furnishings. The rug gives a homely feel and the plants bring nature into the room. The fishbowl provides a soothing atmosphere. The only thing I would change is the mirror, maybe put it in the wall that faces the bed.
Thanks! Yes, I think I need to work on the photofrapgy/screenshot skills! anyway, thanks again for the sugestions, I'll imrpve the house according to the suggestions, tho obviously comps over. Anyway, thx