Retribution-100 Baby Challenge (Prologue, Chapters 7-11 8/23/14)

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Cyril Bouvier-O'Brien was living a fairly normal life in the sleepy town of Riverview until he was awoken in the middle of the night by his mother's scream. By the time he entered his parents' room they were dead with only bite marks on their necks as a clue to their killer. Now with the help of a heavenly creature he is on a quest to bring his parent's murderer to justice.

CHAPTERS
Prologue
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6

KirstyL

Looks interesting.

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KirstyL wrote:

Looks interesting.

thanks. i tried to make this story mysterious.

Nancy01905

Very interesting start

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Nancy01905 wrote:

Very interesting start

thank you

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chapter 1

Nancy01905

Good job on the first chapter

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chapter 2

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chapter 3

Nancy01905

He is handsome

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Nancy01905 wrote:

Good job on the first chapter

thank you nancy

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Nancy01905 wrote:

He is handsome

i thought that too when i finished his makeover

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chapter 4

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chapter 5

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chapter 6

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http://retribution100babychallenge.blogspot.com/2014/08/chapter-7.html

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http://retribution100babychallenge.blogspot.com/2014/08/chapter-8.html

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http://retribution100babychallenge.blogspot.com/2014/08/chapter-9.html

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http://retribution100babychallenge.blogspot.com/2014/08/chapter-10.html

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http://retribution100babychallenge.blogspot.com/2014/08/chapter-11-baby-4-and-5.html