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    The Goodfellow Legacy By Rosiep

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    rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
    in The Sims 3 Stories and Legacies
    Hello Everyone! This is the base of the Goodfellow legacy story. You may also be interested in my other forum The Legacy Coffee Corner -

    http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/0/748704.page#11947131

    Happy Simming!

    The story will be posted below.

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    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
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      Hello! My name is Fawn Goodfellow. I live with my parents, Pip and Lucia

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      As well as my teenage sister, Macey.

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      In this house!

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      This is the only family I have, before I was born their was a huge Tsunami which killed the rest of my family, my parents were one of the lucky few to survive.

      On my eighteenth birthday, I signed up to join the military. This had been my dream ever since my mother took me on a tour at the base near by.

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      My father explained to me that I was to become his heir and he wanted the family to live on and grow once again to honour those who died.

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      I happily agreed to continue the Legacy of the Goodfellow family!

      My boyfriend Jarvis came round to meet the family the next day.

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      Not that Macey cared, Macey devoted her life to school work and painting. She couldn't care less about the family.

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      Jarvis is the love of my life.

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      I can't take my eye's off him.

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      He decided to stay and 'meet the family some more'.

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      After all family is the most important thing. ;)
      Post edited by Unknown User on
    • LittleMinxUndrLittleMinxUndr Posts: 4,196 Member
      edited April 2014
      Jarvis loves a woman in uniform! Come to think of it, so do I. ;-)
      My Going Solo Story: The Wasimtons
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      LittleMinxUndr wrote:
      Jarvis loves a woman in uniform! Come to think of it, so do I. ;-)

      Haha Love It! :D:wink:
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      UPDATE TWO

      Jarvis asked me to meet him at Red Velvet after work.

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      We hadn't seen each other all week, I guess job's get in the way. But that didn't matter once we saw each other.

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      We embraced and I never felt more alive. His hands, his face, his everything; is all I have ever dreamed of.

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      The moment felt right.

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      "Jarvis will you marry me?"
    • LittleMinxUndrLittleMinxUndr Posts: 4,196 Member
      edited April 2014
      Say yes, you fool!!!

      Sorry, lol.
      Awesome update, it looks fantastic!
      My Going Solo Story: The Wasimtons
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @LittleMinxUndr Thank you! Do you think this update was better than the first story telling wise?

      I have most of the pics ready for the next update so it won't be to long!
    • LittleMinxUndrLittleMinxUndr Posts: 4,196 Member
      edited April 2014
      I think that you're hitting your stride! You remain true to your style, good and crisp sentences and screenshots that mostly have action in them, which makes them interesting to see. I like your layout, screenshots allign nicely relative to eachother. It's awesome.

      (If I'm allowed to make one small observation, for your style, avoid using pictures where your Sims are doing nothing, like in the first screenshot of the second chapter. Since you don't describe with text, your screenshots have to do the work. The rest of the screenshots are perfect!)
      My Going Solo Story: The Wasimtons
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @LittleMinxUndr thanks for the feedback! I am absorbing all of your advice! :)
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      Update 3

      Jarvis - "Of course I'll marry you! You are the most gorgeous women I have ever had the pleasure of meeting!"

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      Jarvis - "This ring is the bee's knee's! Where did you get it!"

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      We kissed goodbye for today and agreed to meet each other tomorrow.

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      I got home as fast as I could so I could tell the family. Dad was the only one home and when I got there...

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      Well... I guess I know what he does in his free time. :)

      I told him that me and Jarvis and now engaged and will be soon planning our wedding.

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      I then went to bed.

      I woke up the next day to get ready for work when I saw Macey sitting on the couch.

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      Something was wrong...
    • LittleMinxUndrLittleMinxUndr Posts: 4,196 Member
      edited April 2014
      That's one funky dad! :lol:
      My Going Solo Story: The Wasimtons
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      LittleMinxUndr wrote:
      That's one funky dad! :lol:

      I just loved that screenshot so much I needed to place it somewhere :)
    • AngelzzzDaydream0AngelzzzDaydream0 Posts: 1,087 Member
      edited April 2014
      She's very pretty and the pic of her dad made me giggle! :lol:
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @AngelzzzDaydream0 - Thanks for reading and your feedback. Next update up soon!

      xxx hugs and pugs xxx
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      Hello everyone! I would like to here your name suggestions both male and female for upcoming characters. Thank you in advance! :)

      xxx hugs and pugs xxx
    • SikoahGraceSikoahGrace Posts: 1,399 Member
      edited April 2014
      That Dad has some serious moves.
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @SikoahGrace He should teach dance lessons :p .

      xxx hugs and pugs xxx
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      Update 4

      Macey still seemed distant so I decided to tell her some news to cheer her up.

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      Fawn - " Macey, your going to be an aunt. I'm Pregnant! Don't tell Mam and Dad, I haven't told Jarvis yet!"

      Macey seemed happy, she burst into a huge smile!

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      Macey - " I have something to tell you to. I am also pregnant!"

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      Fawn - "Macey! You are seventeen! You haven't even finish high school!"

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      Macey - " It's ok! I can cope just keep it a secret!"

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      Fawn - " Fine! But you will have to tell Mam and Dad at some point. Next time Macey go to the cinema!"

      The next day I told Jarvis about the baby when I got back from work. He couldn't be happier!

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      I'm so worried about Macey...
      Post edited by Unknown User on
    • PmlTryPmlTry Posts: 783 Member
      edited April 2014
      That sister looks like a real piece of work.
    • SikoahGraceSikoahGrace Posts: 1,399 Member
      edited April 2014
      Macey needs to cool her jets. A baby is serious wake up call. What an interesting twist to things. Two babies? Close to the same age? :shock:
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @PmlTry and @SikoahGrace - Thanks for reading! Also the next update has more about Macey and how she is coping.

      Writing the update now so it won't be long!

      xxx hugs and pugs xxx
    • serindeppityserindeppity Posts: 6,690 Member
      edited April 2014
      Looks like it's gonna be a full house!!
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      Danevbie Legacy 8.24
    • Piazzagirl1015Piazzagirl1015 Posts: 2,500 Member
      edited April 2014
      Nice start to your story and I bookmarked it. Your Fawn looks great, in my game sp was not very nice to Fawn I'm afraid. Poor Dahlia, I guess she was killed in the Tsunami and Pip remarried.
      Macey looks like trouble to me.
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    • PmlTryPmlTry Posts: 783 Member
      edited April 2014
      Have you checked out this website? It's a lot of fun and a good tool for choosing interesting names.

      http://www.behindthename.com/random/
    • PmlTryPmlTry Posts: 783 Member
      edited April 2014
      .
      (dupe. Sorry)
    • rosiep2010rosiep2010 Posts: 247 Member
      edited April 2014
      @serindeppity It's definitely going to be a full house! I am a bit behind with updates but photobucket seems to be working again now so... Update within this hour and maybe even two since its easter! :)

      @Piazzagirl1015 Yeah Dahlia was killed in the Tsunami. I only changed Fawn's hair, I didn't need to change anything else because she turned out really nicely!

      @PmlTry Thanks for the website link! I have already named the kids as the game is fairly far ahead of the updates but it's bookmarked ready for gen.4!

      2 Updates today as it's easter!

      xxx hugs and pugs xxx
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