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Timeless Beauties Calendar Girls: Assignment 2 **JUDGES send your scores please**
hushfirefly
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Welcome back ladies and gents to Assignment 2!
Assignment 2- Swinging 60s
Well shake it up baby now, shake it up baby. Twist and shout, twist and shout.
Grab those go-go boots because it's time to start swinging in the 60's! It's 1964. Beatlemania was in full force, the bikini was invented and skirts were on the rise via the introduction of the mini-skirt. Where do we find your Calendar girls Twisting, Shaking and even doing the Locomotion? At the beach, office, discothèque, rock concert, Vietnam protest maybe? Use the ideas given or get creative! So come on, every guy, grab a girl, everywhere around the world, there'll be dancin'!
Year: 1964
Month: March
Remember you do not have to use the month but hey if you can pull it off, we definitely won't be complaining!
Maximum of ONE picture!
DUE DATE: TUESDAY 14TH DEC
No eliminations for this round again but that's no excuse for slacking off
My very talented partner-in-simming, sereniticat2, has provided you with an example pic.
Groovy baby yeah!
Fashion
Mini-skirts, pencil and pleated full skirts, the "space look", with trouser suits, white boots, goggles, and box-shaped dresses whose skirts soared three inches above the knee. These were mainly designed in fluorescent colours and shiny fabrics such as PVC and sequins. The mini dress was usually A-line in shape or a sleeveless shift. Bell-bottomed trousers were usually worn with chiffon blouses, polo-necked ribbed sweaters or tops that bared the midriff. Nipped in waists, full-skirted ballgowns with low décolletage and close-fitting waists, short plastic raincoats, colourful swing coats, dyed fake-furs, skinny jeans, stilettos, kitten heels, flat boots, headscarves, false eyelashes, thick dark eyeliner, long straight or wavy locks, beehives and very short styles popularized by Twiggy. Blues, greens, and shimmery eye shadows were popular. Psychedelic prints, highlighter colours, and mismatched patterns.
Research:
Fashion
Songs. Just as reference, you don't have to use them
And this video is actually from the 60's on fashion in London. Dancing starts at the 8 minute mark
What you'll be judged on:
Did you keep to the 60's fashion and location? Is she caught in a dancing pose?
Is your Calendar girl standing out from the crowd, or blending into the background?
Are the walls up or down? We'd prefer to see walls up, where they should be.
Are those pesky thought bubbles showing?
Are any extras in your picture behaving themselves?
RULES
1. Please be kind to each other, rudeness will not be tolerated.
2. No face plastering of any kind.
3. We will give extensions when needed, but to make it fair, we ask that you let us know TWO days before the due date, so others can take advantage of the extension. However, we will take into account things such as Patches and game issues ( we know you can not plan those issues)
4. No major changes to model once submitted, unless we allow for it in an assignment. The exception to this rule is CC skin, if skin is causing your game to have issues, I do not mind if you need to change it, just please try to keep it close to the original colour. I will also make exceptions on a case to case basis. ( I understand CC can go wonky) We request that eye colour stay the same, but if you need to remove CC eyes or contacts, that's fine.
5. Hair colour and make up can be changed at any time, it's up to you!
From Seren: You are welcome to check the math on my scores and if you are unhappy with a score please email me at sereniticat@gmail.com
Scoring:
Scoring will be a 100 point process.
Creativity/Topic: /40
Setting: /35
Overall: /20
Pose: /5
Total: /100
Comments:
Calendar Girls
1. JKA w/India Pierce
2. Simpixie2255 w/ Parker-Rose
3. simsolated w/Dawn
4. Blaz w/Cadence Musique
5. Sun2401 w/Natasha Rose
6. rubygal25 w/Mikeala Nicoletti
7. GlamBunny8189 w/Claudia Leigh
8. cupcake w/-Sarafiena Doll
9. Malieanne w/Breck Michaels
10. Bliss87 w/Sun
11. Ssjdbzveg w/Chae Lee
12. kelren837 w/BeBe Glover
13. ladyluckO9 w/Braelyn Tin
14. simslover740 w/Kelsey Hindes
15. Poida w/Skye Anderson
16. frasersim w/Destiny Cain
17. kweenkatz w/Julia
18. amieechu w/Lightning
19. hamsterlover16 (Rocky) w/Ciara Ashton
20. ilovetaylorlatner w/Luchia Raymond
Seen It-
Turned In -
Dropped-
Good luck!!!
Every little piece of your life, will mean something to someone.
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Comments
I think I can speak for all four of us that for a no elimination round, this was incredibly hard, you all did such amazing jobs and it's only the first assignment!!
Please remember, we are here to help and offer advice, not criticise
Assignment One Scores
The winner of this round is JKAmaryllis! Congrats JK!!
JKAmaryllis
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total:100
Comments: Panda, what can I say about this picture? There is so much right here and I can find nothing wrong. I love everything about it. Detail detail detail! From the tree changing colours in the yard to her high cuffed pants and half jacket...to the lettering, it's all just so right. The puddles! I have to mention the puddles! Fantastic!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: So retro! So 50's! I thought it might be hard trying to pull off tomboy in the 50's but wow, you pulled it off flawlessly JK! Great angling with car so it points towards India. All the little details, water puddles everywhere, little bubbles, just brilliant!
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 99/100
Comments: Oh wow, this is beautiful. I love this photo- wasn't a big fan of the setting- but that barely knocked down your score! Good job!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: Favorite entry, and I love the idea! Everything about this picture seems to be shouting WOW. Great job! Also loving how you got the month on there!
Total For panda- 399
cupcake
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40 /40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: This picture is fantastic. This looks like it could be an add or magazine page right out of history. Your attention to detail is fantastic, right down to the paneling on the outside of the house. I love the towels standing by, ready for use. The angel of this pic makes it even more fascinating. Even though you have so many little details in the pic, our focus is still on your model! Great job !
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: Oooo boy! Sarafiena is just demanding attention is this picture. Her clothes,pose and facial expression is so perfect, dispelling any disbelief that her floors couldn't possibly be that clean. Loving the angle of the picture as it allows you to see her spotless and very 50's kitchen. Awesome job cupcake, she steals my attention every time!
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 96/100
Comments: This is extraordinary. The only thing I didn't like though was the background and her expression, all though I knew you couldn't really do anything about that.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 99
Comments: Wow cupcake, the idea and creativity is amazing! The pose is fab and really I can't find anything wrong with your picture, good job
Total for Cupcake- 395
POIDA
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: Poida, where do I know her from? have I seen her in green, by any chance? Well, regardless of where I may know her from, she just looks so sweet in this picture. Her expression could be a mix between, "I am so proud of this pie." and "Honey, you're home and I'm so happy to see you !" Either way, you nailed this assignment for me. I love the font of the text. I love the clean mod yet oddly traditional lines of the furniture. The colouring for the pic as a whole is just lovely and so is her flowered apron. After dinner, is she going to be playing Canasta? I think she may do! Great job
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 98
Comments: poida, she looks as sweet as the pie she's made
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 97/100
Comments: Wow. This is wonderful! But, 1) The expression is kinda weird, 2) The kitchen looks to modern for her, and 3) Not to creative, but whatever >.< Good job!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: I had to give you full scores for this! I thought you did brilliantly. Nothing much to say about this apart from AMAZING, also the month is on there always a good thing!
Total For Poida- 395
blazaxx
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 97
Comments: Blaz, I really liked this pic. I love the window with the City view and the stormy look to it. I love love the "husband" and the tray of food on the table. I even really love her pose...it's the story that threw me a bit. I like the idea of her actually being a model and this being a shoot gone wrong...but it could have been fitting and really comical to have that actually BE her hubby and maybe he's complaining about the cold cuts instead of a roast for tea. Or maybe there was a Pro-woman article that he didn't like.. But I really think you've done a wonderful job here and I really love this picture!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 97
Comments: Aw Cade, it's not a hideous picture! Very out of the box blaz, I love it. Spot on with that photographer
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 99/100
Comments: Wicked! Love it! But something seems wrong, I don't know what, though. But seriously, epic picture. One of my favorites.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 98
Comments: Love the entry and ermm long story but good lol. I think the picture is good and i love how you got the month....
Total For Blaz- 391
Sun2401
seren-
389Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: This just blows me away. Typical man, ignoring her, even though, it's clear she got made up glamorously after dusting and met him at the door with his favorite drink! How dare 🐸🐸🐸🐸? Let me tell you Sun what I like in this pic, I like the camera angel, I like the dining nook with all the little extras on the table, I love the man of the house drinking one down, in just the right glass for the era and I love her hair make up and dress. Now, let me tell you what I don't like in this picture- NOTHING! This is fantastic!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 98
Comments: I would get another man Natasha
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 99/100
Comments: Wow, so perfect! The only thing weird is that the setting doesn't really match the time... it's more modern >.< :XD:
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 15/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 92
Comments: Me thinks you aced the setting lol. The idea is nice and so was creativity all i will say is that it looks like the feather duster was placed there, rather than blending with the picture, maybe a different pose would have worked.
Total For Sun- 389
Malieanne
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 93
Comments: I love that Breck likes to have a good time, even when doing house work. The little cap, which is adorable, makes her look more like a maid doing someone else's housework instead of her own. Over all though, you've done a really great job! I love that feather duster and the vacuum!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 96
Comments: This picture is so much fun! Gotta love her doing the housework tipsy, which was pretty common then for the wives at home
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100/100
Comments: Not much to say except that I thought this picture was so perfect and amazing.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 34/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 93
Comments: Loving everything about this entry, how she is holding the vacume and the duster, great pose, maybe a different angel though?
Total for Malieanne- 382
kelren837
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 94
Comments: Lol, do we have a newlywed here or is Bebe just a very good 1950's wife?! I love her expression! I kinda wish you'da stuck him in behind her, that would have really tickled me. I think you've done a great job featuring your model and setting her to her task..though in that outfit I do wonder just how much cleaning she manages to get done. Great job !
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 95
Comments: Lol that was a naughty insight into Bebe's life
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 97/100
Comments: Everything about this photo gleamed perfection. Though, I read your sentence on the photo and it says Bebe's surprised from her husband- but that doesn't really look like "surprise" and if I didn't read the sentence, the picture would've been confusing. Do you catch my drift? Anyways, good job.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 96
Comments: I love, love, LOVE this entry lol. I like how she is holding the broom and she dresses up... The only thing that wasn'r for me is the red hair, maybe keeping a more natrual color would have looked better as the red hair sorta clashes with the red on her dress.
Total For Kelren- 382
Ssjdbzveg
Seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: She is just so happy to have those freshly washed and fluffy warm cloths! I adore her expression so so much, never have I seen such a happy home maker. Her hair and clothing are perfection..and did I mention her expression? I just so love this pic, I have nothing to fault it for whatsoever. Fantastically done!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 96
Comments: Her style is elegant 50's housewife all over! Her facial expression is of a very pleased and content lady of the house. Your picture is very simple but not lacking in detail. The one thing that took away the glamour feel was the walls. They look very grungy and out of place next to the elegant Chae.
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 36/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 90/100
Comments: Wow, awesome picture. But I felt like you were missing the "Wow" part. But, good job!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 34/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 91
Comments: Lol's @ her pose, I think it's cute but funny at the same time, the angel and lighting was nice. Your setting was good. You did a pretty good job.
Total for Ssjdzbeg- 377
Frasersim
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 99
Comments: Every time I scroll down the page that this pic is on, I just am compelled to stop and stare at it. This is so what I envision the 1950's kitchen, from the little half curtains to the wall paper, just so right to me. I love that she is almost an acrobat, juggling the cake tin and the mixing bowel at once. Her dress and hair perfect! The only thing i would change is that I wish we were a little closer up to her. I understand with the time spent on the set that you really want to show it off though. I'm really impressed with this! Great job!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 97
Comments: This picture is so cute fraser! That wallpaper is dead on for that decade, so is the colour scheme
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 34/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 90/100
Comments: Wow, you nailed the background! But, I felt like you were missing something in your photo.. Like, it just didn't "Wow" me. I'm not sure, but good job!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 15/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 84
Comments: Not sure about the all pink lol, but the idea is great and I'm guessing your model was ritch then? I like your setting and your models outfit but again pink...
Total for Frasersim- 370
BLISS
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 20/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 100
Comments: I really love this! This so speaks to my girly nature, all the bright yellow, the bubbles the apron. Wow. Oh oh- the sparkle on the plate! ya know, I didn't even notice that she wasn't smiling until i read what you said. I don't mind her expression, maybe she takes clean dishes very seriously! Really, I can't fault anything with this pic. Fantastic job!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 91
Comments: Sims facial expressions can be completely frustrating! I usually get "Smiling Idiot Syndrome". Where my sims face is frozen in this creepy smile and they don't move their mouths when they talk or kiss, just that weird frozen smile expression. Usually typing "resetSim Sun (her last name)" into the cheat box helps reset their face. I'm useless at editing so I can appreciate the effort into superimposing that dish into her hand and it was a excellent pose to begin with!
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 91/100
Comments: This is such a cute photo! It would've been so perfect if you had a different background and had a different expression! That expression ruins it all! Good job, though!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 34/40
Setting: 29/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 84
Comments: Nice entry, I like the little spark on the dish, the pose is great! But the plain face. The background was good and fitted what you was going for, although I would have liked to see more of a homey feel.
Total For Bliss- 366
GlamBunny8189
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 97
Comments: Glam, I ate it and I DID like it!...honest! What I also liked is your pic, LOVED it actually. Great job. her pose really made this, I can picture the Man of the house at the table waiting for her. Will she or wont she be cheeky when she places that home cooked meal down? Wish i were a fly on the wall. I wanted to mention, that I really enjoyed the detail of the crock pot inside the cabinet! Fantastic!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 93
Comments: Usually I'm not one for text but it is a calendar photo and it works so well with your picture! Her facial expression conveys the "Shut up and eat it" message perfectly. The daisy wallpaper is adorable glam.
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 91/100
Comments: Hehe, your model's head is really big for her body :shock: Lol, yeah. But, cute idea and everything!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 30/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 15/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 85
Comments:Loving everything on this picture accept the writing. I don't think the white background really helped, It would have looked better if you just had it transparent
Total For Glambunny- 366
RubyGal
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 93
Comments: Ruby, I really like where you were heading with this pic. I love the kitchen, it’s so 50’s. The turkey is a tiny bit over sized for the set. But I do like this picture very much and think you did a great job.
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 92
Comments: It actually took me a few minutes to realise that's not a sim kitchen, so huge props for that amount of work! She looks very stressed but still looks absolutely adorable doing it. What could be improved is having her in the middle as the turkey is actually pulling all the focus. I will never take points off anyone for editing/graphics etc but I do encourage you to try and do it in game
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 90/100
Comments: Wow. Good photo but there was just something missing! Like to bright or something! Or maybe it's because she doesn't look like she belongs there. Ya'know, you don't have to edit every photo
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 89
Comments: This was a really nice entry, it made me laugh. Her pose is great but not to sure on the turkey on the side...it looks out of place but everything else nice job
Total For Ruby- 364
simslover740
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall:19 /20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 94
Comments: That dress is fantastic and she wears it well. I really like the pose you caught her in. I really like the idea behind this picture, it IS beautiful. I actually didn't think you needed the text, even though it was fun. The text isn't out of place though, so I've not taken points off for it, I DO like it...but I think your pic is pretty enough without it. Good job !
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 95
Comments: I like the direction you took with this simslover. I also like the twist on "Beauty and Brains"
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 30/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 2/5
Total: 79/100
Comments: Well, I'll be honest and say this is not my favorite photo. I've seen other photos from you and I know this is not your best. There's just no "wow" and her pose is so... Blah. Anyways, good job.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 35/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 93
Comments: This entry was georgous, the pose and everything, really pretty. Love, love, love it. Nice job keep it up
Total For Simslover740- 361
hamsterlover16
Seren-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 92
Comments: I really like the clean lines of this pic. Your model looks lovely, even whilst doing the laundry! I think you've done a very good job here, the only thing I would like to see are a few more background details to let us know where she is. Is she home or at a laundry-mat? Your setting is a little nondescript, but with some knickknacks or some flowers or the like would have just added to your picture. Over all though, great job, your model shines.
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 91
Comments: Cute idea having Ciara carrying the cleans clothes. My only nitpick is the giraffe picture, it takes away the focus of your model and makes the lighting on her look darker by comparison. The paintings in the game are incredibly bright with a shine for some reason, like a wall light. So in the future just be aware of objects in the background, move them to the side, that way your model is the center of attention. Also, adding a ceiling light a spot or two in front of your model will draw more light to her face
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 36/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 90/100
Comments: Awesome. I really loved this photo, but I wasn't a fan of her expression nor the background- it was just so bland >.< Other than that, wow.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 30/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 84
Comments: This entry was really good in my opinian, the pose was nice, and I liked how she held the towls, I just wish she had a bit more of an interesting facial expression, also a different angle?
Total For hamsterlover- 357
Simpixie2255
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 36/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose:5 /5
Total: 90
Comments: Simpixie, I really like the pose and angel of this shot. It shows off your model so well! I actually like the idea behind the lingerie; however, there is nothing in the pic that really depicts era of the 1950's. Maybe if the lingerie had been softer and more the look of the 50's..it would have been more fitting. Also, this could have been really comical with her making the bed "after" you -know-what and have a very happy hubby in the background, or have her fluffing his pillows. I so think you were on the right track though, so please don't be discouraged by the score. I think we can see some really great things from you in this comp.
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 95
Comments: How deliciously naughty simpixie! Very Betty Page
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 34/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 95/100
Comments: Adorableness! Love it! Background, not the best. But the expression is just so darn cute >.<
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 30/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 13/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 77
Comments: The idea of cooking in your lingerie was really not for me, it just didn't seem to fit the time zone and doesn't seem like something you would put on a calender if realted to this assignment, the setting was nice and so was the cooking but i don't think your model's clothing was sutible.
Total For SimPixie- 357
ilovetaylorlatner
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 39/ 40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose : 5/5
Total: 95
Comments: You hoped we'd like it and I do ! I think you've done a great job with this assignment. You've really set the scene and captured the moment just right. I do wish we were a little more zoomed in to see her face a little better and her yellow top gets a little bit lost in all the rest of the yellow, but other than those two minor things, I have no idea what I'd change. Great job !
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 37/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 91
Comments: I love the grungy, vibrant feel of this picture, ILTL. Your set is very 50's that I now want a pastel pink washing machine
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 32/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 88/100
Comments: Wow, not bad! This photo would've been amazing if you had... 1)Gotten a closer shot and 2)Gotten a different pose. Other than that, awesome!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 30/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 15/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 79
Comments: I liked the idea, although I feel it could have been a little bit more creative! It relates to the assignment which is great but seems more of advertisement rather than something you would see on a calender, also not to sure about the yellow and green wallpaper...it kind of makes ur model blend in a bit to much. (Because she is wearing a yellow shirt)
Total For Ilovetaylor- 353
kweenkatz
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 40 /40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 19/20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 97
Comments: Goodness, she looks demented. You're right she IS obsessed. It's very comical though and it made me laugh. I do wish we had a closer pic of her face, even though the face she is making is a bit...crazy. Hehe. What I love about your set are those tacky 1950's floral sinks...my great aunt had those at one point. I wish there was a little more bathroom clutter, but otherwise great job! This pic was so fun.
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 40/40
Setting: 31/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 2/5
Total: 90
Comments: Such ferociousness for doing the cleaning! The spray bottle, you did an awesome job editing that in but the feather duster, I can make out the white around the edges. Not that much of big deal as I can't edit to save my life, any edits are amazing in my eyes. I do wish Julia was facing the camera a bit more. Like if you went lower with the camera down towards the sink (Q) and scooted to the left a bit (A).
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 12/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 80/100
Comments: Oh, Kweenz! I know you can do better than this! The white dots and lines on the floor and the okay editing job ruins this photo! I'd love to see your model closer and the setting was blah. Too much brightness, also. I think you could've done better without the border :XD: Good job, though!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 14/20
Pose: 4/5
Total: 83
Comments: Nice entry, the idea was good. I'm not to keen on your boder though... Also i like how you got your model holding the brish and spray but she is sorta scaring me lol. Nice job
Total For kweenkatz– 350
ladyluckO9
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 36/ 40
Setting : 32/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/ 5
Total: 89
Comments: This was a good idea, I like that you tried something a little different then everyone else. I would really like to have seen your pics brightened but still have the 60's cut out feel to them. I love the gardening gloves she has on, such a nice touch. Good job.
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 38/40
Setting: 31/35
Overall: 16/20
Pose: 2/5
Total: 87
Comments: I really like the nostalgic edit you added to both pics. You submitted two pictures but I noticed we never specified how many we wanted, so that's our fault, not yours. We''ll make sure to be specific next assignment
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 29/35
Overall: 12/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 79/100
Comments: Good job! This would've been even better if you had had the walls up, gotten a little closer, and we could see your models face! That's a big thing in modeling! We want to see your models face! Good job, though!
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 36/ 40
Setting : 32/35
Overall: 17/20
Pose: 4/ 5
Total: 89
Comments: This was a good idea, I like that you tried something a little different then everyone else. I would really like to have seen your pics brightened but still have the 60's cut out feel to them. I love the gardening gloves she has on, such a nice touch. Good job.
TOTAL For Lady Luck- 344
Amieechu
seren-
Creativity/Topic: 39 /40
Setting: 33/35
Overall:19 /20
Pose: 5/5
Total: 96
Comments: Really love the camera angel here Amiee! And that bubble floating away is adorable. I think you've done a great job capturing the moment and this assignment. And Oh how seriously she takes dish washing! I would have liked to see the lighting brightened, but this is just such a great picture!
hush-
Creativity/Topic: 39/40
Setting: 33/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 93
Comments: I believe I share the same expression with Lightning when it comes to dishes. Good use of angling amie, draws you right into Lightning's mood. I do think it could be a bit brighter, lighting wise, or maybe just a different colour scheme in the background to break up the green of her dress.
Crg-
Creativity/Topic: 35/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 18/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 86/100
Comments: This was fairly good. Except for the pose and the setting, and you were lacking creativity. But other than that, good job.
pixie-
Creativity/Topic: 25/40
Setting: 30/35
Overall: 12/20
Pose: 3/5
Total: 70
Comments: I liked the idea, the setting was nice but your picture seemed to be lacking creativity and your model looks like she is about to either lose her temper or cry...
Total For Amieechu- 345
Ctrl + Shift + C to open cheat box, then press enter after typing what you want.
Hiding speech bubbles, skill bars and plumbbobs
Type: hideheadlineeffects on
Moving sims/objects
Type: moveobjects on
Unlocking outfits and hair
Type: unlockoutfits on
Unlocking expansion objects
Type: buydebug on
Type /help for any other commands.
Camera Mode
Press TAB to access to the camera mode
Using Charlotte in her 60s gear, I will demonstrate all the different ways you can use the camera.
Just with pressing TAB
Pressing W-move forward
Pressing S-move back
Pressing A-move left
Pressing D-move right
Pressing E-tilts camera up
Pressing Q-tilts camera down
Pressing Shift and A-changing angles to the left
Pressing Shift and D-changing angle to right
Pressing Z-zoom in, (X to zoom out) then pressing Shift and D, creating a totally different look.
Pressing Shift and S resets the picture back to normal.
Lighting
Lighting in the game can be iffy at times, so here's simple way to get some light onto your model! Start out with no light.
I use the Lucid Light in the ceiling light category, as it is the closest flat light to the ceiling.
Then place it a few squares in front of your model or just move it around until you find the most flattering light.
See, much better, no editing/lighting effects at all used!
You could also add more lights in different places to create shadows or add more light on one side or both. It's all about playing around and seeing what works best for your model
Hopefully this gives you all a bit more of an idea 8)
Btw where/when do we get our scores, im excited
I'm all giddy, my first thread and I didn't break the page or nuthin
oh sorry
i'm really excited about this assignment, hopefully i did alright in the last one
This should be interesting to see how I work it in with my story
Oh and Seren, incredible. Simply incredibly. You shouldn't have worried about that, not in the slightest.
Steam: JKAmaryllis
I know blaz and JK, I can't believe she thought I wouldn't like it :roll:
And Hush I'm very relieved you noticed the bubbles. I was worried no one would see them lol
Steam: JKAmaryllis
Lurking is always nice as well lol
(seren sed I could post a link lol) but i am bit busy atm making the model wall
I've added some tips and tricks 8)
After 3am, time for serious sleep!
Another cool assignment....will be lurking to see what everyone comes up with!
Steam: JKAmaryllis
Post it ! Post it ! Post it !
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5047/5239423000_254dddae42_o.jpg
Click the link for actual size.
One of the perks of being an upcoming model is hanging with some famous and highly influential people, including Tom Lemon from General Salt's Lonely Hearts Group.
I really hope someone gets that lol.
Steam: JKAmaryllis
What special effect is that on the image? cause that is totally kick ***
I can't help editing, its what i've always done >:]
JK-can't believe you are done! So jealous! It is a really cool pic!
And panda! Fantastic job on this round's pic ! Wow !
Hehe I'm glad you all like the example pic ! One of those ken Dolls in the back is Poida's Sim Iggy with a Ken make over !