Andrew, I read the story and I thought it was interesting. Two completely different sisters; and the house is awesome.
Some advice: I don't want to sound rude, and if I am, please forgive me for that is not my intention, but try to brush up on your English a little bit.
Tell more about the family maybe in another addition to the story.
Are you planning on more insights of the Bathe family? If so, try to explain a little bit, (Doesn't have to be all at once) about the family.
You have already shown where the sisters work and live, but are the parents dead or a live? I know its only two stories in, but just saying.
I'm overjoyed to find this thread! Thank you for starting it, SwishStar. I'm finding reading and writing stories even more fun than gameplay, if that's possible. I recognize a few of you from the the apocalypse challenge thread and have read and enjoyed your stories. (Plumbob Legacy and Rotten Legacy) I look forward to reading many more and would also like to make a shameless plug for my apocalypse story at http://ginj-varlandstory.blogspot.com
I'm overjoyed to find this thread! Thank you for starting it, SwishStar. I'm finding reading and writing stories even more fun than gameplay, if that's possible. I recognize a few of you from the the apocalypse challenge thread and have read and enjoyed your stories. (Plumbob Legacy and Rotten Legacy) I look forward to reading many more and would also like to make a shameless plug for my apocalypse story at http://ginj-varlandstory.blogspot.com
I love the story!! I love the points of views! Your writing is just amazing. I got sad when she dies! And Grim is a character-oh-sorry. Jacques Elroi Desmond. XD
Is there anymore coming? I would love to see Anders and Neil with family.
@shwishy love the new avie so pretty! make a story with her! ^o^ ~*
@ginj I love your apoca legacy! The first legacy I ever read was an apoca back on ts2 and it got me hooked on the game again ^_^ I kinda really wanna do one now but my brain is too tiny to handle more than one thing at a time. :>
@shwishy love the new avie so pretty! make a story with her! ^o^ ~*
@ginj I love your apoca legacy! The first legacy I ever read was an apoca back on ts2 and it got me hooked on the game again ^_^ I kinda really wanna do one now but my brain is too tiny to handle more than one thing at a time. :>
Yes I am using her the next story ^o^
She is to cute not too.
Her personality just springs out of my mind. I can't wait to write more about her. lol.
I have a little bit a treat for those of you who would want to know I have a bit of a "trailer" For my story coming next year.
A little taste of the story to come.
^_^ Please tell me if you are going to be excited to read. And also please listen to the song, very important that you do.
Andrew, I read the story and I thought it was interesting. Two completely different sisters; and the house is awesome.
Some advice: I don't want to sound rude, and if I am, please forgive me for that is not my intention, but try to brush up on your English a little bit.
Tell more about the family maybe in another addition to the story.
Are you planning on more insights of the Bathe family? If so, try to explain a little bit, (Doesn't have to be all at once) about the family.
You have already shown where the sisters work and live, but are the parents dead or a live? I know its only two stories in, but just saying.
Happy Simming!
Hi!Thanks for reading my stories and thanks for your advice!I am not from England or USA but i try to spell English right!They are also my first stories!
SwishStar, I eagerly await your story. I like the black and white photography and the music is beautiful. I couldn't really make out the "Evergreen" lyrics but the haunting, ethereal music quality puts me in mind of "Follow Me" from Camelot.
It is about a strange child, named Romarin, who is not far from trouble when she is adopted by a family across the sea. While keeping herself quarantined in the beach town she grew up in, she figures the only alternative is to go where no one has ever heard of her; to go to the place where it all started...
I hope you like it! And being a creation by me, it's horror themed. To the best of my knowledge, i was the first person on the Sims3 to edit blood into pictures *cough cough*
It is about a strange child, named Romarin, who is not far from trouble when she is adopted by a family across the sea. While keeping herself quarantined in the beach town she grew up in, she figures the only alternative is to go where no one has ever heard of her; to go to the place where it all started...
I hope you like it! And being a creation by me, it's horror themed. To the best of my knowledge, i was the first person on the Sims3 to edit blood into pictures *cough cough*
ZOMG! I loved it! So..different! Charm school, huh? EEEP!! I want more! Give more!! *throws tantrum.*
lol.
How do you do the blood effect, by the way?
What editing program do you use.
I use to use gimp, but it would resize the pictures and they would look at stupid like.
So now I use photobucket editing.
PLEASE!! let me know what you use.
Blood effect would be very helpful for my story.
(Btw, did you read the trailer? )
I can't wait for more!
And to the others:
Clairezy: You can call me whatever you want. ^_^ Patricia or Swish. And yes, its suppose to be a little darker then the last story. o_o and I can't tell you if its a happy ending or not
=o You'll have to find out.
lol
Ginj: Thank you!! It'll be out January!
The song is very beautiful...it gives me the haunting feeling as well. And a slight feeling of melancholy, you could say. lol. Strange, huh?
Swishy, there is a program on my computer called "Corel" that i use to draw in blood. Really all you need is a program with a blending kind of brush, just nothing with blunt edges so it looks natural fading it in. On the one slide i used CC for the bloody hand. I believe it was from TSR. I'm looking for it, but i have to go to work now,haha, but i'll resume the search for its orgins.
I read your preveiw! It looks promising. I can't wait to see what you created this time!! I have an inkling it might not take you till next year to get a chapter out, fingers crossed.
Swishy, there is a program on my computer called "Corel" that i use to draw in blood. Really all you need is a program with a blending kind of brush, just nothing with blunt edges so it looks natural fading it in. On the one slide i used CC for the bloody hand. I believe it was from TSR. I'm looking for it, but i have to go to work now,haha, but i'll resume the search for its orgins.
I read your preview! It looks promising. I can't wait to see what you created this time!! I have an inkling it might not take you till next year to get a chapter out, fingers crossed.
Corel! I use to have corel...where did it go I wonder >.> (Epic computer change. Dell to Alienware XD)
And, I'm trying to have at least ten chapters written out before I upload the first chapter. I still have building to do. (God, I hate building sometimes. Its a pain in the ****.)
But, i'm going to fiddle with some program to see if the blood thing works, then I'll put it up here on this thread to get all of your opinions.
Okay, so here are some test pictures I used to try to edit. I need to work a little bit more on the realism I think. But that is that best I can try to do.
The blood ones are a little hard, since I don't have the proper things to use.
(I used some pictures from photobucket that I had from my last story.)
Here you go:
What do you think?
I think I need to do more work...but for my first try, its pretty alright...right? XD
..... I'd love to check out everyone else's stories, and here's a link to my blog if any of you would like to see one of mine-I've written literally hundreds that I haven't shared, but maybe if I could spark more interest I'd consider! lol http://petalpaths.wordpress.com
I added you to my blog roll, my link is in my siggy
Aw thanks! added ya to mine too, but only read a little so far since I'm editing some pics for a new chapter, working on a story on the side, and studying for exams! lol But I plan to read more tonight and leave you comments!
Thank ya SwishStar, and your avi is so adorable!! Btw, the pic in the middle is very nice. I could use that blood on the neck for the story (project) I have going on the side-where did you get that from?! LOL Keep up the great work!
Ginj: Thank you!! It'll be out January!
The song is very beautiful...it gives me the haunting feeling as well. And a slight feeling of melancholy, you could say. lol. Strange, huh?
I have a little bit a treat for those of you who would want to know I have a bit of a "trailer" For my story coming next year.
A little taste of the story to come.
^_^ Please tell me if you are going to be excited to read. And also please listen to the song, very important that you do.
Ohhh! I love the teaser! The pictures are so dramatic...can't wait!
Thank ya SwishStar, and your avi is so adorable!! Btw, the pic in the middle is very nice. I could use that blood on the neck for the story (project) I have going on the side-where did you get that from?! LOL Keep up the great work!
Thank you! ^^ The avi is extremely adorable. lol. Aya Blare happens to be my favorite character in my up coming story.
The blood on the neck I did with photo editing. I edited it with photobucket photo editing.
Just took the paint brush, got a dark blood like color and made the lines to look like a bloody cut on the neck, then I softened it up with the soften effect, using advance; paint brush.
Still a noob with the special effects though. lol. I can edit pictures with ease, but adding effects is kind of hard. lol
Ginj: Thank you!! It'll be out January!
The song is very beautiful...it gives me the haunting feeling as well. And a slight feeling of melancholy, you could say. lol. Strange, huh?
Deena's going loco! HAHA!
I like the story, soo soso soso so much.
O.O
If this place had a rating thing like the sims 2 I would totally give five stars.
(Then again, The rating system on the sims 2 was kind of dull sometimes when you would get down-raters. But some of the site setups are better then this site. lol.)
This is the link to my story. It has been written a few months ago already and I only got 15 views and no reccommendation at all! I must say I way pretty dissapointed... After all I did my best for this story. Hope you can find time to read it and if you like it please reccommend it for me. Thank you!
And by the way, you can find some of Marquise Royal own style of furniture on my page. Hope you like them!
I have a little bit a treat for those of you who would want to know I have a bit of a "trailer" For my story coming next year.
A little taste of the story to come.
^_^ Please tell me if you are going to be excited to read. And also please listen to the song, very important that you do.
Ohhh! I love the teaser! The pictures are so dramatic...can't wait!
Comments
Claire: I voted for heir! 8D
I have posted my stories before,did anyone view them? :roll:
Happy Simming!!!
Andrew, I read the story and I thought it was interesting. Two completely different sisters; and the house is awesome.
Some advice: I don't want to sound rude, and if I am, please forgive me for that is not my intention, but try to brush up on your English a little bit.
Tell more about the family maybe in another addition to the story.
Are you planning on more insights of the Bathe family? If so, try to explain a little bit, (Doesn't have to be all at once) about the family.
You have already shown where the sisters work and live, but are the parents dead or a live? I know its only two stories in, but just saying.
Happy Simming!
I love the story!! I love the points of views! Your writing is just amazing. I got sad when she dies! And Grim is a character-oh-sorry. Jacques Elroi Desmond. XD
Is there anymore coming? I would love to see Anders and Neil with family.
@ginj I love your apoca legacy! The first legacy I ever read was an apoca back on ts2 and it got me hooked on the game again ^_^ I kinda really wanna do one now but my brain is too tiny to handle more than one thing at a time. :>
Yes I am using her the next story ^o^
She is to cute not too.
Her personality just springs out of my mind. I can't wait to write more about her. lol.
I have a little bit a treat for those of you who would want to know
A little taste of the story to come.
^_^ Please tell me if you are going to be excited to read. And also please listen to the song, very important that you do.
Thanks for all!
Happy Simming!!!
SwishStar, I eagerly await your story. I like the black and white photography and the music is beautiful. I couldn't really make out the "Evergreen" lyrics but the haunting, ethereal music quality puts me in mind of "Follow Me" from Camelot.
looks good but can I plzzz haz happy ending
Installment one is titled
"Cake Batter"
http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=133731
Can you tell i'm hungry?
It is about a strange child, named Romarin, who is not far from trouble when she is adopted by a family across the sea. While keeping herself quarantined in the beach town she grew up in, she figures the only alternative is to go where no one has ever heard of her; to go to the place where it all started...
I hope you like it! And being a creation by me, it's horror themed. To the best of my knowledge, i was the first person on the Sims3 to edit blood into pictures *cough cough*
ZOMG! I loved it! So..different! Charm school, huh? EEEP!! I want more! Give more!! *throws tantrum.*
lol.
How do you do the blood effect, by the way?
What editing program do you use.
I use to use gimp, but it would resize the pictures and they would look at stupid like.
So now I use photobucket editing.
PLEASE!! let me know what you use.
Blood effect would be very helpful for my story.
(Btw, did you read the trailer?
I can't wait for more!
And to the others:
Clairezy: You can call me whatever you want. ^_^ Patricia or Swish. And yes, its suppose to be a little darker then the last story. o_o and I can't tell you if its a happy ending or not
=o You'll have to find out.
lol
Ginj: Thank you!! It'll be out January!
The song is very beautiful...it gives me the haunting feeling as well. And a slight feeling of melancholy, you could say. lol. Strange, huh?
YAY FOR MORE ANDERS!!
Can't wait!
I read your preveiw! It looks promising. I can't wait to see what you created this time!! I have an inkling it might not take you till next year to get a chapter out, fingers crossed.
Corel! I use to have corel...where did it go I wonder >.> (Epic computer change. Dell to Alienware XD)
And, I'm trying to have at least ten chapters written out before I upload the first chapter. I still have building to do. (God, I hate building sometimes. Its a pain in the ****.)
But, i'm going to fiddle with some program to see if the blood thing works, then I'll put it up here on this thread to get all of your opinions.
The blood ones are a little hard, since I don't have the proper things to use.
(I used some pictures from photobucket that I had from my last story.)
Here you go:
What do you think?
I think I need to do more work...but for my first try, its pretty alright...right? XD
Aw thanks! added ya to mine too, but only read a little so far since I'm editing some pics for a new chapter, working on a story on the side, and studying for exams! lol But I plan to read more tonight and leave you comments!
Thank ya SwishStar, and your avi is so adorable!! Btw, the pic in the middle is very nice. I could use that blood on the neck for the story (project) I have going on the side-where did you get that from?! LOL Keep up the great work!
Then, more Anders you shall have! http://ginj-varlandstory.blogspot.com
Ohhh! I love the teaser! The pictures are so dramatic...can't wait!
Thank you! ^^ The avi is extremely adorable. lol. Aya Blare happens to be my favorite character in my up coming story.
The blood on the neck I did with photo editing. I edited it with photobucket photo editing.
Just took the paint brush, got a dark blood like color and made the lines to look like a bloody cut on the neck, then I softened it up with the soften effect, using advance; paint brush.
Still a noob with the special effects though. lol. I can edit pictures with ease, but adding effects is kind of hard. lol
YAY!!
Deena's going loco! HAHA!
I like the story, soo soso soso so much.
O.O
If this place had a rating thing like the sims 2 I would totally give five stars.
(Then again, The rating system on the sims 2 was kind of dull sometimes when you would get down-raters. But some of the site setups are better then this site. lol.)
This is the link to my story. It has been written a few months ago already and I only got 15 views and no reccommendation at all! I must say I way pretty dissapointed...
And by the way, you can find some of Marquise Royal own style of furniture on my page. Hope you like them!
wee!
Thankies!