As promised Tiana was at my side and helped me where she could. The pain was strong and I was full of fear. What if I get a boy? Would I be ever able to flee? What was with the feeling of being watched? The pain got stronger and I knew the moment was ther to face the future.
I pressed and after a short period of time I held my frist born child in my arms. I named my little boy Armeni. He was the most beautiful thing on earth I had ever seen.
I cared for him and gave him all my love. Even though I was very tired and exhausted my thoughts went back to my escape.
I took my little boy out of his crib and wanted to leave.
Note: Leaving Fire‘s view
„I was very close to escape, but Parallo and Zuru were in my way. I tried to fight against them, but I had no chance. Parallo took Armeni and went inside. Zuru brought me to the house of punishment. I cried until I felt asleep. Tiana stole the key of my cell and said I have to leave. There was no chance to take my boy with me. Please Tebethia, help me. You can punish me for my faults, but I have to make sure my baby is safe.“
Tebethia looked very strict at Fire.
„You are right. I should punish you. You lied to me, you didn‘t do your work and you got pregnant without the right. In my opinion you are punished enough, but you know this must have consequenses… Nomir, Keria, Fire we go and take back our tribal son.“
Soon they arrived the village of tribe Genero.
„Listen. I go and find Parallo, Nomir you take one of the other man and Keria speak with the women. Especially with Danera. Fire stay in the background and take your son as soon as possible.“
Tebethia found Parallo very quick.
„YOU! How do you dare to treat a amazon like that I should kill you for that!“
„Oh I should be afraid. You are just a plum woman what could YOU do to me?“
„You better should be afraid and I will show you why right now!“
With these words Tebethia jumped on the suprised Parallo and hit him in the face. Tebethia got also some hits of Parallo, but she was stronger and faster than him.
Soon the fight was over and Parallo was knocked out. Tebethia went ouside and searched for her next victim.
The first man Nomir found was Kaleile.
„What do you want stranger?“ Said Kaleile, his voice full of mock.
„Don‘t talk to me like that! You are lower than me because I‘m a master and you are only a piece of plum!“
Nomir was very strong and attacked the aweful man first.
Nomir was qiuck like a snake and Kaleile didn‘t hit him even once.
Kaleile was knocked out too. Only Zuru was left now.
Tebethia had already found him. The only word she said to him before she attacked was „YOU!“
She hit him hard and full of anger.
From all the fights of today this was the longest and the one that hurt Tebethia the most.
Tebethia was stronger and finally she knocked Zuru also out.
„It is not over.“ Zuru hissed at her.
Meanwhile Keria spoke with the women. First with Danera. They didn‘t talk long. Danera cried a lot, but Keria was not sure if it was honestly or not… Normally She was good at that.
Tiana on the other hand was a clear situation. She was really desperated and Keria knew they had also to help her. Now there was nothing they could do for her. Tiana was afraid to leave and to get punishment and so she decided to stay.
„It is over, Fire. Take your son and come with us back to the tribe.“
„Thank you so much. I don‘t know how I could thank you for that.“
„You know I have to do something because of you. Don‘t be to relieved yet.“
„It doesn‘t matter what you do with me. My son is safe. That is all I wished“
Fire hugged her wonderful creator. She was so happy at that moment. She couldn‘t remember the last time she was that happy.
Back at the Naheli tribe, Fire held her son in her arms and she didn‘t want to give him ever back into the crib.
I just read it all and wow - you are very creative and talented. I love how all of the characters have personalities, even the men. I think sometimes it can be easy to overlook it in a challenge like this. I also love Fire and felt so bad for her. I thought the same as @roseinblack69 about the little boy and I am hoping he won't have to suffer the same as all tribal sons do
On the next morning a well knowen figure appered at the Naheli compound and he was not alone.
„What are you doing here!“ Tebethia shouted at the two men.
„What do you think? We are here to take back my son. The first time was just luck. Now your whole tribe has to die.“ Parallo said with a grimly voice.
Nomir rushed outside too. He had to protect Tebethia.
The slave and the creator looked at each other and they knew exactly what to do next. Tebethia and Nomir attacked at the same time.
This fight was longer than all the others before. This time the mean men weren‘t suprised of their attack.
At least both men were defeated.
„For the attack of our tribe I, the creator of tribe Naheli, send you both to the pit of death. I would let you go, but you do want to harm my tribe and treat women like trash. From now on we will take over your tribal grounds and your tribe members. Also Zuru will be sent to the pit of death and now GO!“ Tebethia said with a strict and confident voice.
Nomir looked back at the men. He was really glad of Tebethia‘s decision and they deserved the death.
Tebethia talked with Fire just a few moments ago. After Parallo and Kaleile‘s death the tribe needed a leader. Fire was very suprised as Tebethia said Fire would be the creator of that new tribe. Fire was honored and she always knew that she wouldn‘t be allowed to stay with her former tribe. The best thing was that she was allowed to take her son with her. Armeni would also be like a boy that wasn‘t born into an amazon tribe, so his future options were numerous.
Fire went to the men in the pit.
„What are you doing here, snake.“ Parallo hissed at her.
„I just wanted to say goodbye, but now I just wish you to die quick.“ Fire answerd angrily.
Fire waved and went inside.
The men were left alone again in the cold water. Both were frightened to face death, but there was nothing they could do against it.
Fire was not the only one that visited them. Also Keria went to them.
„Nobody is only bad inside.“ She said to them.
„It is too late to correct your faults here, but if you want I pray that your souls will find peace in the afterworld."
Parallo started to cry and then he shouted at Keria „No! I will never rest until I get my revenge. You will all pay for that!“
„Then there is nothing I could do for you.“
Keria went into her temple again.
She didn‘t pray for them. Keria asked her ancestors for advice. They said she should place the graves of them near the hermit in Granite Falls. It would be also good for Keria to collect new plants and forget about her thoughts.
The twins didn‘t really understand what was going on, but they knew the men were mean and had to die.
„Marina? I don‘t know why they were so mean to aunt Fire, but I promise you to protect you like mother protects Fire.“ Zaraphire said smiling at her sister.
„I promise you too.“ Marina said and hugged her sister.
Nomir worked hard as always. He felt relieved that Fire didn‘t have to die too or get banished for her faults. Tebethia promised Fire to be at her side when ever she would need help with something. Tebethia was happy because of her decision and so Nomir was too.
Tebethia trained very hard these days. She had insert a lot of wounds and she wanted to make sure she would win all the fights that maybe come in the future too.
While Nomir was upgrading the hot tub, he felt an icy shower over his skin. Nomir knew at that moment that the first of the men left this world.
He ran over to the pit and saw how Kaleile‘s body was under water.
Soon the other joined him and they all bent respectfully their head.
Tebethia stayed a bit longer than the others and so she saw also Parallo‘s death. She knew she made the right decision, but she felt bad for killing them.
Grim walked into the main building and set next to Keria as always when he visited tribe Naheli.
„The time is near, my child. Be prepaired.“
„I know. I just hope Palla was wrong.“
Grim dissapeared into the shadows.
After the death of the two men, Fire moved to her new tribe as creator. She threw Zuru in the pit of death and went to look after the other women.
Tiana was training at the moment to run away one day. She stopped because she heard a sound of footsteps. Tiana was afraid that maybe the men came back, but it was Fire. Tiana hugged relieved her friend and thanked her and tribe Naheli for all after Fire told her what happened.
Zuru was angry. How could that chick force him to go in the pit? He was the strongest. Footsteps were coming closer to him.
To Zuru‘s suprise it was Danera. She opened the pit.
"I help you out there, but you have to promise me something.“
„What ever you want my queen.“
„We run away with my son and you have to protect us. You will show Ferro how to fight and train him. I have a plan to take revenge for my Parallo…“
Oh wow so many things are happening! I don't want Zuru to flee he was the worst of these men And I wonder what Palla's prophecy was about! Great chapter
Oh wow! Such great chapter! I hope Zuru and Danera's plan will fail. Danera has chicken's brain, if she trusts such bad person as Zuru I'm happy for Fire and her little boy as he will not be sacrificed Yay!
@Julyvee94 I know. Actually Zuru should die with the others but nobody liked him enough that he could visit the tribe
Where is lol when I need it xD btw there is a cheat for that. You would have to look it up but there is a cheat which will let any sim spawn on your lot.
Read the last chapters just now. It keeps getting more and more intresting ^^ I'm so glad that Fire and her son are well and that Tiana will have a safe place where to have a baby one day. (I hope at least!)
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As promised Tiana was at my side and helped me where she could. The pain was strong and I was full of fear. What if I get a boy? Would I be ever able to flee? What was with the feeling of being watched? The pain got stronger and I knew the moment was ther to face the future.
I pressed and after a short period of time I held my frist born child in my arms. I named my little boy Armeni. He was the most beautiful thing on earth I had ever seen.
I cared for him and gave him all my love. Even though I was very tired and exhausted my thoughts went back to my escape.
I took my little boy out of his crib and wanted to leave.
Note: Leaving Fire‘s view
„I was very close to escape, but Parallo and Zuru were in my way. I tried to fight against them, but I had no chance. Parallo took Armeni and went inside. Zuru brought me to the house of punishment. I cried until I felt asleep. Tiana stole the key of my cell and said I have to leave. There was no chance to take my boy with me. Please Tebethia, help me. You can punish me for my faults, but I have to make sure my baby is safe.“
Tebethia looked very strict at Fire.
„You are right. I should punish you. You lied to me, you didn‘t do your work and you got pregnant without the right. In my opinion you are punished enough, but you know this must have consequenses… Nomir, Keria, Fire we go and take back our tribal son.“
Sucker for pain - Evina's story
Soon they arrived the village of tribe Genero.
„Listen. I go and find Parallo, Nomir you take one of the other man and Keria speak with the women. Especially with Danera. Fire stay in the background and take your son as soon as possible.“
Tebethia found Parallo very quick.
„YOU! How do you dare to treat a amazon like that I should kill you for that!“
„Oh I should be afraid. You are just a plum woman what could YOU do to me?“
„You better should be afraid and I will show you why right now!“
With these words Tebethia jumped on the suprised Parallo and hit him in the face. Tebethia got also some hits of Parallo, but she was stronger and faster than him.
Soon the fight was over and Parallo was knocked out. Tebethia went ouside and searched for her next victim.
The first man Nomir found was Kaleile.
„What do you want stranger?“ Said Kaleile, his voice full of mock.
„Don‘t talk to me like that! You are lower than me because I‘m a master and you are only a piece of plum!“
Nomir was very strong and attacked the aweful man first.
Nomir was qiuck like a snake and Kaleile didn‘t hit him even once.
Kaleile was knocked out too. Only Zuru was left now.
Tebethia had already found him. The only word she said to him before she attacked was „YOU!“
She hit him hard and full of anger.
From all the fights of today this was the longest and the one that hurt Tebethia the most.
Tebethia was stronger and finally she knocked Zuru also out.
„It is not over.“ Zuru hissed at her.
Meanwhile Keria spoke with the women. First with Danera. They didn‘t talk long. Danera cried a lot, but Keria was not sure if it was honestly or not… Normally She was good at that.
Tiana on the other hand was a clear situation. She was really desperated and Keria knew they had also to help her. Now there was nothing they could do for her. Tiana was afraid to leave and to get punishment and so she decided to stay.
„It is over, Fire. Take your son and come with us back to the tribe.“
„Thank you so much. I don‘t know how I could thank you for that.“
„You know I have to do something because of you. Don‘t be to relieved yet.“
„It doesn‘t matter what you do with me. My son is safe. That is all I wished“
Fire hugged her wonderful creator. She was so happy at that moment. She couldn‘t remember the last time she was that happy.
Back at the Naheli tribe, Fire held her son in her arms and she didn‘t want to give him ever back into the crib.
Sucker for pain - Evina's story
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Sucker for pain - Evina's story
On the next morning a well knowen figure appered at the Naheli compound and he was not alone.
„What are you doing here!“ Tebethia shouted at the two men.
„What do you think? We are here to take back my son. The first time was just luck. Now your whole tribe has to die.“ Parallo said with a grimly voice.
Nomir rushed outside too. He had to protect Tebethia.
The slave and the creator looked at each other and they knew exactly what to do next. Tebethia and Nomir attacked at the same time.
This fight was longer than all the others before. This time the mean men weren‘t suprised of their attack.
At least both men were defeated.
„For the attack of our tribe I, the creator of tribe Naheli, send you both to the pit of death. I would let you go, but you do want to harm my tribe and treat women like trash. From now on we will take over your tribal grounds and your tribe members. Also Zuru will be sent to the pit of death and now GO!“ Tebethia said with a strict and confident voice.
Nomir looked back at the men. He was really glad of Tebethia‘s decision and they deserved the death.
Tebethia talked with Fire just a few moments ago. After Parallo and Kaleile‘s death the tribe needed a leader. Fire was very suprised as Tebethia said Fire would be the creator of that new tribe. Fire was honored and she always knew that she wouldn‘t be allowed to stay with her former tribe. The best thing was that she was allowed to take her son with her. Armeni would also be like a boy that wasn‘t born into an amazon tribe, so his future options were numerous.
Fire went to the men in the pit.
„What are you doing here, snake.“ Parallo hissed at her.
„I just wanted to say goodbye, but now I just wish you to die quick.“ Fire answerd angrily.
Fire waved and went inside.
The men were left alone again in the cold water. Both were frightened to face death, but there was nothing they could do against it.
Fire was not the only one that visited them. Also Keria went to them.
„Nobody is only bad inside.“ She said to them.
„It is too late to correct your faults here, but if you want I pray that your souls will find peace in the afterworld."
Parallo started to cry and then he shouted at Keria „No! I will never rest until I get my revenge. You will all pay for that!“
„Then there is nothing I could do for you.“
Keria went into her temple again.
She didn‘t pray for them. Keria asked her ancestors for advice. They said she should place the graves of them near the hermit in Granite Falls. It would be also good for Keria to collect new plants and forget about her thoughts.
The twins didn‘t really understand what was going on, but they knew the men were mean and had to die.
„Marina? I don‘t know why they were so mean to aunt Fire, but I promise you to protect you like mother protects Fire.“ Zaraphire said smiling at her sister.
„I promise you too.“ Marina said and hugged her sister.
Nomir worked hard as always. He felt relieved that Fire didn‘t have to die too or get banished for her faults. Tebethia promised Fire to be at her side when ever she would need help with something. Tebethia was happy because of her decision and so Nomir was too.
Tebethia trained very hard these days. She had insert a lot of wounds and she wanted to make sure she would win all the fights that maybe come in the future too.
While Nomir was upgrading the hot tub, he felt an icy shower over his skin. Nomir knew at that moment that the first of the men left this world.
He ran over to the pit and saw how Kaleile‘s body was under water.
Soon the other joined him and they all bent respectfully their head.
Tebethia stayed a bit longer than the others and so she saw also Parallo‘s death. She knew she made the right decision, but she felt bad for killing them.
Grim walked into the main building and set next to Keria as always when he visited tribe Naheli.
„The time is near, my child. Be prepaired.“
„I know. I just hope Palla was wrong.“
Grim dissapeared into the shadows.
After the death of the two men, Fire moved to her new tribe as creator. She threw Zuru in the pit of death and went to look after the other women.
Tiana was training at the moment to run away one day. She stopped because she heard a sound of footsteps. Tiana was afraid that maybe the men came back, but it was Fire. Tiana hugged relieved her friend and thanked her and tribe Naheli for all after Fire told her what happened.
Zuru was angry. How could that chick force him to go in the pit? He was the strongest. Footsteps were coming closer to him.
To Zuru‘s suprise it was Danera. She opened the pit.
"I help you out there, but you have to promise me something.“
„What ever you want my queen.“
„We run away with my son and you have to protect us. You will show Ferro how to fight and train him. I have a plan to take revenge for my Parallo…“
Sucker for pain - Evina's story
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Sucker for pain - Evina's story
On my Blog:
After Kasanovas come Blaubers|The strange body|Nexir, forgotten King|Signature by @Marialein
Where is lol when I need it xD btw there is a cheat for that. You would have to look it up but there is a cheat which will let any sim spawn on your lot.
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Sucker for pain - Evina's story
Sucker for pain - Evina's story