Judges Assignment 1 Critiques
As there is two judges, you get double the points
Ordinarily you will also have two critiques but this week we were only able to do one
Critique/scoring is as follows:
Pop Punk@zbern12
Pop Punk
Genre Representation-16/20
Requirements Met-12/20
Photo Quality-10/20
Set-2/10
Creativity-16/20
Appeal-8/20
Personal Taste-10/20
TOTAL SCORE: 74/130
Positives: I loved the model, I thought she represented the genre perfectly. I maybe wouldn't have gone with a Misfits t-shirts as they are two different genres, but still. I also liked the layout.
Negatives: I can see what you were going for with the background as it is called Pheonix, but I didn't like it at all. I felt that it cheapened the picture rather than added to it.
Overall opinion: I thought that it was a good try. The photo itself could have been bigger, and it could have been a little more tasteful but as far as genre representation goes it was pretty good. I wouldn't put it on my wall though.
Pop@Sims3fan1986
Pop
Genre Representation-16/20
Requirements Met-16/20
Photo Quality-12/20
Set-4/10
Creativity-12/20
Appeal-12/20
Personal Taste-14/20
TOTAL SCORE: 86/130
Positives: I looooove that hair when you are representing Katy Perry, so pretty. I got a cotton candy vibe from this which I loved, very Katy.
Negatives: I didn't like the background. I felt it didn't fit in with the theme of the photo, and something like clouds would have gone so much better. The clothes left a little to be desired also, but overall they were pretty suited for the task at hand.
Overall opinion: The model looks very pretty, really quite lovely. I see alot of Katy Perry in what you produced, but there were just a few things that could have been changed. Try continuing the theme all the way through.
Country@Sims4Kat
Country
Genre Representation-20/20
Requirements Met-18/20
Photo Quality-20/20
Set-10/10
Creativity-20/20
Appeal-20/20
Personal Taste-20/20
TOTAL SCORE: 128/130
Positives: Gorgeous! The model, the setting, the font, the dress!! Everything was beautifully done and I absolutely loved it.
Negatives: Nothing, literally. The only thing that I maybe would have put is a tagline, hence the one point off on requirements but it's not that important.
Overall opinion: Adored it!!! You nailed the genre, the artist, the feel of the song. Everything was on point.
Acoustic@AshleySims
Acoustic
Genre Representation-16/20
Requirements Met-14/20
Photo Quality-8/20
Set-8/10
Creativity-16/20
Appeal-12/20
Personal Taste-14/20
TOTAL SCORE: 80/130
Positives: I love the idea that you had with the Polaroid, very acoustic. The setting in a park is lovely too. I thought that the model looked really nice, and overall it was a nice picture.
Negatives: It could have been bigger, and the quality could have been a little better. I also think that the font could have been more elegant.
Overall opinion: It's a cute, lovely picture. I really like the simplicity of it and the vulnerability in the model as that's the feeling I get when I listen to Ed Sheeran. It was really nice, but a few things would need working on like the quality and few bits and pieces.
Rap@Rivers
Rap
Genre Representation-18/20
Requirements Met-18/20
Photo Quality-20/20
Set-8/10
Creativity-18/20
Appeal-20/20
Personal Taste-18/20
TOTAL SCORE: 120/130
Positives: The execution of the picture is flawless. Everything is on point, from the model to the font to the layout. I loved it. I'm glad that he looks more manly now! I think you did a fantastic job representing your genre and artist.
Negatives: Mayyyybe push just a little bit more. There seemed to be some feeling missing in this photo, and although it was one of the best in the bunch I think it might have been just a little generic.
Overall opinion: The model looks great, the layout was lovely and I think it looks very professional. I would want maybe just a little more personality.
Techno/Dance@MizoreYukii
Techno/Dance
Genre Representation-18/20
Requirements Met-18/20
Photo Quality-20/20
Set-6/10
Creativity-16/20
Appeal-16/20
Personal Taste-16/20
TOTAL SCORE: 110/130
Positives: Your model looked absolutely gorgeous! She fits the genre so well, and I am in love with her look. The execution has been done really well, and the photo is fantastically edited. Great quality!
Negatives: I didn't really like the background, and the font was a little too heavy for the idea that you were going for. She also could have been wearing a tad more colour.
Overall opinion: Gorgeous model, seriously love her so much. The execution is flawless, I am looking forward to seeing what else you can produce.
There will be no cuts this week due to two contestants dropping out.
Please, please remember that this is constructive and is in no way meant to make anyone upset or mad.
Thanks guys
RANKING ORDER
1ST PLACE:
@Sims4Kat
2ND PLACE:
@Rivers
3RD PLACE:
@MizoreYukii
4TH PLACE:
@Sims3fan1986
5TH PLACE:
@AshleySims
6TH PLACE:
@zbern12
CONGRATULATIONS,
@Sims4Kat, YOU ARE IMMUNE FROM ELIMINATION NEXT WEEK.
2ND ASSIGNMENTENTERTAIN.
You have been hired to perform onstage for an artist of within your genre. Your job is to entertain the crowd, but you have to look the part whilst doing it. Poses and looks are very important for this assignment.
You have until 30th June to complete the assignment. If you have any questions, please ask
Assignment example
2ND ASSIGNMENT ENTRIESPop Punk@zbern12Pop@Sims3fan1986Country@Sims4KatAcoustic@AshleySimsRap@RiversTechno/Dance@MizoreYukii
Comments
Thanks.
Yeah, sure. It's myself and another member so you can make the third if you like.
Well reserve definitely
Awesome.
Yep, not a problem.
Awesome! I'll PM you later on!
Name: Kris
Age: 25
Description: Kris is a total tomboy on the outside. She listens to pop punk and dresses in dark clothes, but on the inside she is a total girly-girl. She tries to show it, but in a way she still seems like a tomboy. She found a way to do so, she went to modeling.
Headshot
Body Shot:
Genre: Pop Punk
Why this contest?: I want to join this contest to book my first modeling job to start my modeling career, and to show my girly side in a way it's still sort of a secret.
Wow she's so pretty!
Yep, not a problem.
Cool.
She's cute.
If anyone knows anyone that you think would be interested in this, please tell them about it.
Age: 21
Description: Miley is a nice girl once you get to know her. She has 17 older sibling and she always got the hand me downs. But now that she is moved out of the family home she wants to try and make it out there in the world like her Mom did for her and her siblings.
Genre: Pop
Why this contest?: She saw how her Mom Amber love doing it and want to see if she could get her name out there too
Headshot
Bodyshot
Yeah of course.
Awwwh, she's real cute.
I think I can manage with techno/dance though, especially because I can do awesome lighting effects. Reserve please! Now to make a sim.....
Okay, will reserve for you.
The remaining genres are reggae, acoustic, country and rap/r n b.
Yay we are halfway full!
Sorry pop is already taken. We have r n b/rap, reggae, country and acoustic available.
Well, I guess some of Lana's music is kinda R&B. But not rap. Can I use Lana Del Rey with R&B?
Wish there was Alternative style music.
We can replace one of the genres with that if you like. Although what do you mean by alternative?
Age: 22
Description: Kelly has a love for music and posing for everyone. At a young age she showed alot of skill with an electric guitar and then went on to write her own music and to tour as a backup with other bands. She is now looking to change the road onto something new so why not modelling.
Genre: Classic Rock
Reason to Enter: Out of all the modelling competitions I have seen this is a first and I thought it was a great idea.
She's pretty!