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TayTay4899
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Welcome to Susurrous Innocence!(Whispering Innocence) A mixed comp of different assignments and such.
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Sianna123
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Since there is 8 of you I did 4 personalities and 4 expressions/emotions. This was chosen by a randomize program.
Angel-Neutral Emotion
Louisa-Goth
Sianaa-Rocker
Kendall-Tomboy
Kendra-Preppy
Bebs-Depression
Jaz-In Love
Jab-Anger
FIRST PLACE
Bebs with Brandi
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 9/10
Model Appearance: 10/10
Creativity: 9/10
Followed Guidelines: 4/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 37/40
Brandi looks stunning. I love how you can still see her face and her clothes fit perfectly. Quality was really great except that little plant but no escaping that. I don't see a border, so I had to mark down one point. (Please let me know if there is one and that I'm being blind.) No other complaints about this. I love the background and creativity. Great job Bebs.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 9/10
Model Appearance: 9/10
Creativity: 9/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 37/40
WOW! Thats all i can say! This picture is just wow! Picture quality is so good it doesn't even look like the sims! Model looks stunning and fits the role perfectly! Story is so creative it's just freakin amazing! Guidelines have been followed amazingly. Pose is just as amazing as everything. Nothing bad to say!
OVERALL: 74/80
Second Place
Louisa with Madlyn
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 8/10
Model Appearance: 9.5/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 35.5/40
Madlyn looks great in this. I love how you took writing to another level. Can't complain much about anything in your picture. Quality was great. Model was gorgeous. It was quite creative. (Compared to sports and such.) You followed quidelines and the pose was perfect! Be careful with the border. It's a little thick.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 8/10
Model Appearence: 10/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 36/40
Picture quality is great. Not amazing, great. The model looks pretty! She has a nice casual look, i just love, everything matches. Creative, although not completely one of a kind unique. Followed the guidelines well. Nice story nice picture. Pose is flawless, great match to the story!
OVERALL: 71.5/80
Third Place
Jaz with Lorelei
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 10/10
Model Appearance: 10/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 4/5
Pose: 5./5
Total: 37/40
Wow.. Just wow. Amazing Jaz. Lorelei looks great in this picture and quality is spot on. I love the idea of surfing and the story behind it. Her hair is gorgeous and I love the belly piercing.! You forgot the border so I had to mark down one. Perfect pose.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 8/10
Model Appearance: 8/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 34/40
Like this one a lot. Picture isn't too bad. Model is pretty. Suits the story well. Creativity is awesome. Love the storyline. Guidelines have been followed well. Pose is amazing for being. Pretty and suiting the story.
OVERALL: 71/80
Fourth Place:
Kendall with Kristy
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 7/10
Model Appearance: 8/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 4.5/5
Total: 32.5/40
Kendall looks like she's having fun.! I love this idea and the pose. No complaints other than the pixelized plants (I understand theres not way around that) and your border is too thick. Guidelines were followed, quality was good (Model-wise), and it was creative. Keep up the good work!
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 7/10
Model Appearance: 9/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 33/40
Love love love this! Quality is good. Model looks absolutely amazing, and suits the story so well! Story is creative and well done. You've followed the guidelines great! Pose is also great! One of the strongest entries yet!
OVERALL: 65.5/80
Fifth Place
Jab with Zenia
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 8 out of 10
Model Appearance: 8 out of 10
Creativity: 9/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 4.5/5
Total: 34.5/40
Yours is quite creepy.. but I like it! I love how mature she looks but she has that childish side to her. This was really creative. The quality was good, and so was the model appearance..though..I would of liked to see her a little more closely. You got the border and the pose matches well. Her facial expression doesn't quite fit but I still like it. Be careful with matching clothing and backgrounds... Her shoes blend a little with the flooring.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture quality: 6/10
Model appearance: 6/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 4/5
Pose: 3/5
Total: 27/40
Sorry, I don't like this at all. It's all a bit weird. Quality is average. I get the model is meant to look halloweenish. But, meh.. It's creative or it's story. I'll give you that. But I just don't like it. You've followed the guidelines also. Pose isn't very posey. It's just a stance.
OVERALL:61.5/80
Sixth Place
Kendra with Megera
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 7 out of 10
Model Appearance: 7 out of 10
Creativity: 7.5/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 4./5
Total: 30.5/40
Kendra looks great in that shade of pink. I like the pose, it fit well with the activity she was doing. The quality is good except her face is a bit smudgy. It was creative and you folllowed the quidelines. Good job! Just watch the thickness of the border.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 7/10
Model Appearance: 7/10
Creativity: 10/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 3/5
Total: 33/40
I like this entry a lot! Mainly for the story, however. Picture quality is good, same as her appearance. Creativity is off the chain! Story is defiantly the best told here! Love how we know all she's been through, by just 5 lines. You could win the whole comp, if you keep up the story work! Guidelines are followed perfectly. No complaints. Pose is meh, could have been better. But Overall i like it!
OVERALL: 63.5/80
Seventh Place
Angel with Angelique
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 6.5/10
Model Appearance: 7.5/10
Creativity: 8.0/10
Followed Guidelines: 3/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 30/40
Comment: Angelique looks wonderful in this shot, although I would of loved to of seen her face more. Her outfit fits along with the background well. Did you use a filter on your picture? It kind of made it look quite blurry. I had to deduct quality points for that. Her foot seems to glitch a bit with the ice skates, but I understand that's hard to avoid. Overall: I think you did a good job. Just watch what filters you use along with making sure you have everything. (You forgot a thin black border.)
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 7/10
Model Appearance: 8/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 5/5
Total: 33/40
I like this 1. Quality is ok. Model looks nice and suits the story. Creative storyline, which i like. Guidelines have been followed well. Pose is amazing!
OVERALL: 63/80
Last Place
Sianaa123 with Annie
Judge Tay:
Picture Quality: 5/10
Model Appearance: 6/10
Creativity: 8/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 2/5
Total: 26/40
Annie confuses me a little. That is quite a strange hobby. I don't quite get the background and her clothes. The quality of the picture is on the decent side.. Her face is blurry and everything is grainy. I would of loved to see her in different clothes. I gave you points for following the quidelines. The pose.. something different. Try to stay away from the glitchy poses that cut into clothing. Different clothing could of helped that. Your border is too thick. Since its the mock I wont mark down since you had one though.
Judge Peterpunch2000:
Picture Quality: 5/10
Model Appearance: 5/10
Creativity: 7/10
Followed Guidelines: 5/5
Pose: 3/5
Total: 25/40
Overall i'm not a big fan of this. Picture quality isn't great, and neither is the models appearence. I can see what you were going for with the story and all. But I'm not a fan. Story has been done before, quite a lot. You have followed the rules. So thats 1 good point. Pose is meh though. Sorry, not a strong entry.
OVERALL: 51/80
Everyone is moving on.
Lurkers are very much appreciated, thank you!
Reserved
Preferred Name: Kendra
Model Name: Megara
Model Headshot **BLACK BACKGROUND:
Bodyshot **BLACK BACKGROUND:
Thank you!
Thank you! She's adorable
Preferred Name: Louisa
Model Name: Madlyn Parker
Model Headshot:
Bodyshot:
Im going to do my mock a little later o3o
She's gorgeous, i'll update when i get home later on.
Of course! I'll update when I get home
Updated soon^^